Fanfiction: Here I Am (1/?)

[ikui]

Title: Here I Am
Genre: General
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Onkey
A/N: All italicized dialogue is spoken in English, while the rest is assumed to be in Korean. About 6000 words long and... Not typical Onkey smut.

Comments

[ikui]

ORZ. How did you even find this fic? I didn't advertise it anywhere! T____T

You are far far too kind, but I am glad you enjoyed this smut. I was worried since Key wasn't the one being... done lol.

D-don't idolize me but omg ♥ thank you. T____T You just made my night ydek. *hands you a tissue* No need to s-sob. /cries like a hypocrite myself

[ikui]

LMAO. I didn't even think of that. Oh LJ search, how very useful you can be.

Ahaha orz, like basically Onew decided his fate right? LOL. I couldn't make Key that uh... typical topish guy for some reason when I tried, so it ended up like this. orzorzorz Admittedly, you lost me near the end there... :'D

Don't force yourself to read my Jongyu fics... Some of them were done when I was trying to remember how to write fanfiction after a long hiatus so they can be pretty awful. T___T Thank you so much for the very undeserved compliments. ♥

ironically I used to not be able to stomach Onkey and look what I wrote.. LOL.

[ikui]

Thank you. T_T

I didn't realize people were even waiting for that fic orz. I wrote one page so far...

[ikui]

LOL WHY WOULD YOU DO THAT? Sit still in your chair missus. >:|

I am not a magician nor do I write perfection but thank you for being so kind. s-sob... Um what dreams that you never knew you had?

/holds you tightly/ I'll start a second part after the Jongyu fic. ;__;

[ggin]

Really, this was fucking amazing.
And I like how you wrote this. I mean, I really really like it. It's not confusing or complicated, well, for me maybe because it's not my mothertongue and though I'm really used to read English and write it I've the feeling that this is so good. If only I could write elaborate sentences like yours or have more vocabulary.
And of course, this is not bad, on the contrary it's an amazing thing because, a part from spending a good time reading the story, I'm able to learn new words and other ways to write, so girl you should be happy with your work :)

Okay, now, the chapter. I'm a fan of this. I'm gonna wait for the next one because it's so good, it's like, that Kibum is too real. I mean, he gives me that vibes sometimes, of being the one trying to contol the situation, and being a little bitch, I mean, mocking the others when he's insecure, so a ten for you. And a plus because of Jinki. I just love this man and here he's a lovely gay <3
Waiting for the next chapppp. <333

[ikui]

Sobs I don't think you should be using a smut fic to help learn English.

But thank you, haha. Key's character is always the most difficult for me so I am glad he worked out. :)

[specialises]

why's your confidence shot? ): i thought this was really well written!

for starters, i rarely read fics where key gets to top, so seeing him top in this fic really made me squeal. and i don't think your fics are confusing or complicated, tbh. ngl, i think you write really well.

i really liked your portrayal of the NYC here(: it does seem like how movies usually portrays it to be; pubs, one night stands and basically fucking a random stranger who later turns out to have some sorta connection with you.

and and! i felt your characterisation was good(: i like how your kibum was all cocky and over-confident, yet caring at the same time. he really does seem like that irl. plus i liked how jinki was the total opposite, unsure of himself and afraid of change. it really gives the fic a very nice contrasting feel!

all in all, i'm gonna mem this and i can't wait for your next chapter! ♥

[ikui]

Ah just... having some bad comments sent to me from yeah... ^^;

lol I am a huge Onew!bottom stan so ofc I made Key top. Glad the portrayal of NYC worked since I've only been there once.
Thank you! T_T