What you read was unedited and gross and not amazing at all. ;____; OF COURSE THIS WAS A FAILURE. Whenever I read over this fic it feels so robotic to me, like oh step one, step two etc etc.
And what do you mean plastic sheen? I love your expression of emotions in your fics! I don't even come close to capturing those kinds of feelings... like loving someone until you feel like imploding or something... orz orz See I can't even express it casually.
ok if that is horrible, than half of the fanfics must be burnt D: THIS IS FUCKING AMAZING AND OSDJFLSKDJFLKSDJFLKSJF I'M NOT COHERENT ENOUGH TO SAY SOMETHING ELSE LOVEEEE. ♥
... You are far far far too kind... BUT OMG YOUR COMMENT IS SO SWEET AND ... just wow.
But yeah, I always see Jongyu as a pairing that switches comfortably lol so i am glad it worked out to be somewhat realistic. ;_:
INSERT FLESH STICK INTO HOLE I was laughing for 10 minutes when I first read this. I still am kind of giggling. But yes, I think it's a must to do other things than penetration for intimate scenes... LOL. I dunno what I am saying but again, glad it kind of worked... I was afraid the whole thing was too choppy. :(
sdksldks THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR THE GIANT COMMENT. ;_____;
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And what do you mean plastic sheen? I love your expression of emotions in your fics! I don't even come close to capturing those kinds of feelings... like loving someone until you feel like imploding or something... orz orz See I can't even express it casually.
... I changed the ending. LOL
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LOVEEEE. ♥
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But yeah, I always see Jongyu as a pairing that switches comfortably lol so i am glad it worked out to be somewhat realistic. ;_:
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I was laughing for 10 minutes when I first read this. I still am kind of giggling. But yes, I think it's a must to do other things than penetration for intimate scenes... LOL. I dunno what I am saying but again, glad it kind of worked... I was afraid the whole thing was too choppy. :(
sdksldks THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR THE GIANT COMMENT. ;_____;
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and i don't even like jongyu that much. /flails
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