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Fanfiction: In Another World

May 06, 2010 16:09

Title: In Another World (Part 3/3)
Genre: Drama/AU
Rating: R
Pairing: Jongyu and Ontae
Summary: They were too similar, and they were too different. He was stuck between two choices even though the answer should have been obvious.
A/N: 5244 words, mature language, violence, death(s).

Previous: Part 1 Part 2

( Hours had passed and Jinki had done little, cleaning up the room followed by moping in a corner with his head pressed to his knees. )

pairing: ontae, rating: r, shinee, !fanfiction, pairing: jongyu, ikui

Comments 8

chinagirl4evr May 11 2010, 00:46:44 UTC

Wow, I was wondering why I did not see the last part. I am glad that I searched for your fic again. I had to read the end even though it was bittersweet. I am glad that Onew was left alone. Thanks for writing this. I enjoyed it very much :)

ex_argh May 16 2010, 12:02:02 UTC

dfkljsdlfkj no wonder I missed this :/ you didn't post it on replay~

ahhh so sad T______T but its also kind of appropriate ;__; sdjfhsdjk of course Jjong had to save Jinki~~~~ ahhh omg I can't believe Jinki killed Minho though (that pretty much breaks my heart^^;)

:( I still think this was awesome ;_; even if everyone except Key died~
♥

ichigochancake May 28 2010, 00:52:35 UTC

... ;~;
you made me cry.

mayuuu June 22 2010, 17:41:47 UTC

OMG WHY AM I SEEING THIS ONLY NOW TT_TT

Okay brb reading :D

mayuuu June 22 2010, 23:16:09 UTC

Lol okay, I wasn't able to comment last night but frankly speaking, it's not even night anymore....it was 2am when I finished reading and I had to go to bed because my dad leaves for work at 2am lol so...

I. CAN'T. STOP. SOBBING. OVER. THIS. No matter how glad I am that in the end Taemin and Jinki kinda confessed the feelings that they had for each other, a sad ending is still a sad ending. Lol did that make sense...? Anyway...

“… If there is anyone that can survive this shithole of a world, it has to be you.” - this part had me sobbing over Jonghyun, srsly. Because he's such a good friend I just want to hug him tightly until he can't breathe anymore. HAHA okay I was kidding :)) but seriously, that was my favorite part. ♥

I loved this fic (all three parts included) to bits. It's well-written, and I really enjoyed reading it even though it made my eyes watery haha. I hope you'll write more OnTae or JongYu fics in the future. Thank you for writing this! ♥

nortonamo July 5 2010, 16:49:57 UTC

Can I have my heart back? Because you totally went all mortal kombat on me.
First you knocked me down on the ground killing all those people and everything.
And when you killed Jjong and Minho, well that just finished me. This fic reached into my chest and removed my beating heart when those two died.
;_; I cried. I actually freaking cried. And hard.
Then, after strangling my pillow to death, I glared at my laptop wishing I never read this amazing piece of work.
But then that ending made me realize I'm glad I did.
This is really one of the best fanfictions I have ever read.
I can't even say how much I loved the beauty in this fic without tearing up.
Gah, I'm so lame =_=''
But really the ending was beautiful. Specially the Kibum part.
;_; please write more like this.
Iloveyou. Kay bye.