Drabbles: Sweet Stuff

Feb 08, 2010 19:49

Four 200 word drabbles
Ratings: G
Author's Note: First time I have ever done 200 word drabbles. I don't really know how they turned out.

Title: Just Bubbly
Pairing: Jongyu
Mischief in the sweetest way possible. )

!drabbles, pairing: jongyu, ikui, pairing: ontae, pairing: jongkey, shinee, rating: g, pairing: ot5, character focus: minho

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lostluna February 9 2010, 10:56:37 UTC
"With a rustle of sheets, eyes widen, impossibly large, as the tall boy is tackled from four directions. He watches his attackers’ grinning faces, their laughter bouncing off the walls and for the first time he hears an odd sound from within himself, a rumbling laugh, clear and bright."

--- Beautiful! The one about Minho's is my favorite. :)

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ikui February 9 2010, 18:06:59 UTC
Hehe thank you~! I like thinking about how the boys helped Minho open up. XD

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xxqod February 9 2010, 13:21:14 UTC
These are all so cute! ^^
Really love the grooming monkeys XD
And Jinki definitely wins from the sun XD
The second one with Minho was really touching :')
<3 ~~

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ikui February 9 2010, 18:09:54 UTC
Thank you! ♥ These drabbles are all fairly sweet. Need to get my angst going.
Glad you enjoyed them. :3

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ichigochancake February 12 2010, 02:39:51 UTC
YOU WROTE MOREEEEE~ ♥

I, of course being biased, loved the OnTae. But you understand being OnTae biased very well, don't you? ;)

I love them all! Mems~ ♥

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naturedichotomy February 19 2010, 14:53:04 UTC
Awwww. "Bonding" was my favorite ♥
All of them were very sweet, though XD

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ikui February 20 2010, 05:15:31 UTC
Thank you~! Glad you liked the one centered on Minho... I don't have a good grasp of his personality so I was scared I would make him ooc. XD

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royalwisteria December 19 2011, 07:37:07 UTC
my favorite drabble of yours here (all of them are fantastic) is the first one/Jongyu one. like. the style of description you used is really appealing, where there's no direct reference to the actual person committing the act, just a list of actions they're doing. it works perfectly in a drabble and then the segue into Jinki catching Jonghyun is perfect aldkfj.

I also really like the Minho-centric one, because I think that you were able to capture Minho at that time. he's quiet, but he wants to join in

for drabble-lengths, I think your characterization is good for all of them.

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