"With a rustle of sheets, eyes widen, impossibly large, as the tall boy is tackled from four directions. He watches his attackers’ grinning faces, their laughter bouncing off the walls and for the first time he hears an odd sound from within himself, a rumbling laugh, clear and bright."
--- Beautiful! The one about Minho's is my favorite. :)
These are all so cute! ^^ Really love the grooming monkeys XD And Jinki definitely wins from the sun XD The second one with Minho was really touching :') <3 ~~
my favorite drabble of yours here (all of them are fantastic) is the first one/Jongyu one. like. the style of description you used is really appealing, where there's no direct reference to the actual person committing the act, just a list of actions they're doing. it works perfectly in a drabble and then the segue into Jinki catching Jonghyun is perfect aldkfj.
I also really like the Minho-centric one, because I think that you were able to capture Minho at that time. he's quiet, but he wants to join in
for drabble-lengths, I think your characterization is good for all of them.
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--- Beautiful! The one about Minho's is my favorite. :)
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Really love the grooming monkeys XD
And Jinki definitely wins from the sun XD
The second one with Minho was really touching :')
<3 ~~
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Glad you enjoyed them. :3
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I, of course being biased, loved the OnTae. But you understand being OnTae biased very well, don't you? ;)
I love them all! Mems~ ♥
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All of them were very sweet, though XD
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I also really like the Minho-centric one, because I think that you were able to capture Minho at that time. he's quiet, but he wants to join in
for drabble-lengths, I think your characterization is good for all of them.
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