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theporchlife

A Good Heart, Part III

Jan 30, 2009 18:32

Title: A Good Heart
Fandom/Pairing: Stargate Atlantis (Ronon/Jennifer)
Rating: PG
Spoilers: None
Summary: AU. A good heart these days is hard to find.

( Part III )

a good heart, stargate atlantis

Comments 4

renisanz January 30 2009, 20:56:07 UTC

Alright, I must admit, I only seriously squee over a few writers of R/K fic, and now yours is one of them. It's, like, exactly what I want to read. I really love how you describe Ronon's mannerisms, and Jen observing them. That's what makes it for me, because the actions speak way louder than words...showing rather than telling, and you do it so well. Can't wait for next time. :)

theporchlife January 30 2009, 21:48:46 UTC

Aw, thanks so much! I'm really glad you like what I've written and your comments always inspire me to keep going. I always try to write stories I would want to read - it's nice to know that someone else out there wants to read the same types of things I do, haha.

renisanz January 30 2009, 22:42:14 UTC

Oh, I forgot to mention. I caught a typo in this sentence:

“Cooks gave me [a limit?] on how much food I could take per meal,”

What I think you were missing is in brackets.

theporchlife January 31 2009, 08:37:20 UTC

Thanks! I'll fix that. I write out my stuff longhand first and then type it up so things get missed.