Put Your Swollen Lips On Mine

[theplumtomato]

Title: Put Your Swollen Lips On Mine
Pairing: Roxas/Axel
Rating: M
Words: 650~
Disclaimer: Don't own anythiiiing <3
Warnings: Sex, random emotional bits, Roxas being insecure about his sexuality, implied homophobic parents. 
A/N: Written for conigliomannaro's prompt, "Axel/Roxas sex scene, not extremely graphic, possibly avoiding the word 'cock'." Sorry that it's kind

Comments

[thiskindalove]

Mmm~

This is lovely, actually, even with Roxas' insecurities and all. I love how they're all quiet and soft and nnngh, I love when Roxas tops.

(I have this personal opinion that Roxas, in-game, starts the whole relationship, because Axel actually has morals, and wouldn't come onto someone that much younger than himself. But once Roxas comes onto him, it's A-OK, and even better, because Roxas always takes charge~ >:3 /babble)

But yeah. Nnngh. I love that it's not graphic. I love your use of the word orison. Mmm. :3

/bliss

[theplumtomato]

Asdfghjkl *hugs and hugs* Thank youuuu <3<3

I have a huge soft spot in my heart for gentle sex, mostly because I've never had it before and I am a massive fucking sap XD

And I have a huge complex for Roxas topping. I would never write anything else, but my head canon dictates me otherwise, so I must. He's just so cute and little and then boom, BAMF. unless he's being an angsty little shit XD

Lololol I agree with your head canon. Roxas is not one to just let things happen on their own, and when he gets an idea, he gives his all. And, n'aww, Axel and your morals *squishes him*

I'm so pleased that you liked it so much, darling <3 (Also, orison is probably one of my favorite words in the English language, so I try not to put it in too many things or there would be orisons all over the place.)

<3<3<3<3<3<3<3

[thiskindalove]

I hate when people forget that Roxas is a BAMF, just because he's wee and cute and blond. He's so STUBBORN and HEADSTRONG and FFFFUUU I love him so much. :| When he's being an angsty little shit, it's totally up to Axel to top, and make Roxas feel all better.

Axel totally only has morals where Sora and Roxas are concerned. *NOD*

ORISONS ALL OVER THE PLACE! \o/ My favourite phrase is "blah blah blah like a hallelujah," but mmm, orison.

:D I totally loved it. Mmm, nice, soft, gentle sex. I love the sappy stuff, too. <3 <3 <3

[theplumtomato]

Oh, god, it is my WORST pet peeve when people depict him as the quivering uke with tears in his eyes. I hate it when ANYONE is depicted as an uke, as those types of relationships don't exist in real life, but especially when it's Roxas. He is such a BAMF, and he totally lets Axel top when he's feeling needy <3

LOLOLOLOL I AGREE. Axel, your morals are strange, but I like them.

And hooray for sappy stuff!!! That also tends to be a theme in my writing, I've found XD

<3<3<3

[conigliomannaro]

Your children. Let me bear them.

[theplumtomato]

ASDFGHJKLHFEUIDJKFHNSAJKDHDISUHUILFD *blushes forever*

Okay <3<3<3

[zenelly]

It was dark, but Axel imagined he could see blue eyes flashing with emotion, face turning soft with it, and it was enough.

All of my heart-breaks. OMG, these two.

[theplumtomato]

They just ask for angst. They do, their entire beings rest on the fact that they are a tragic little pair and I like to exploit them for my own means

No heart breaks! *hugs and nuzzles*

<3<3<3

[zenelly]

They just have this constant "Hit or miss" element to their relationship. They don't always get it right. In fact, they almost NEVER get it right, but when they do, it's so wonderful...

*snuggles*

♥♥♥♥♥♥

[theplumtomato]

It's true. They're both such volatile personalities, and they're both so headstrong. Roxas is impossible when it comes to his own feelings, and Axel is good with his emotions and conveying them to other people but (head canon) he's so afraid of rejection and losing what he has that he won't talk about them.

They have communication problems, our boys.

But when they get it right, it's like fireworks.

*cuddles* <3<3<3<3

[roterstern]

Couldn't yet figure out how to "answer" to a post on tumblr but I'm so happy you posted this here too <3

I absolutely loved this! To be honest this Roxas reminded me a little of boys!Roxas but it was glooorious. I specifically loved this bit so, so much:

Axel wrapped his arms around him, burying his face into blond hair, Roxas breathing hard against his skin.It was dark, but Axel imagined he could see blue eyes flashing with emotion, face turning soft with it, and it was enough.

Just. Just -- DSKJDKJDFK SQUUUEEEAAAL, I tell you! I could see it before my eyes and it's so intimate and beautiful and and and /GUUUSH

nnnghhhh!!! ♥♥ *TACKLES YOU*

WRITE MORE, PLEASE.

[theplumtomato]

*keyboard smash*

fjhasdkfhud Pia. Pia I love you. I love like you felt like it was a bit like boys!Roxas, that is such a huge compliment that you will not ever know.

*hugs and hugs and all of the hugs*

I WILL WRITE MORE. WHEN I AM DONE ALL OF MY SCHOOL SHIT, I WILL WRITE MORE. GIVE ME LITTLE PROMPTS IN MY ASKBOX, I WILL WRITE THEM <3<3<3

Plus I have your stoner request fic, and Jen's commission fic, and and and-

<3<3<3

[bibliophiliac88]

YOU HAVE NO IDEA HOW HAPPY THIS MADE ME. I HAVE BEEN UNABLE TO READ ANYTHING AND THEN THIS CAME UP AND I SHRIEKED. <33333333

YOUR CHILDREN. I AM GOING TO BEAR THEM <3

[theplumtomato]

LOLOLOL NO FIC FOR JEN WHEN SHE'S FROLICKING IN THE LAND DOWN UNDER <3

Okay, you can bear them <3 But I get them once they've been popped out. You can visit whenever <3<3<3<3<3<3<3