Prince of Tennis - The Bird - Yuuta, St. Rudolph (AU) - 3/?

[theotheralissa]

Title: The Bird (3/?)
Previous Chapters: 1 | 2
Characters/Pairing: Yuuta, St. Rudolph, eventual Fujicest
Notes: Futuristic AU.
Disclaimer: Does not belong to me.

Comments

[vanillafire]

:o :o :o

I LOVE THIS STORY. There aren't words adequate enough to convey my love, so I'm going to have to talk in capslock and fangirl, I'm afraid, but... but... wow. I'm still in love with the way you're writing this - the simplicity is beautiful, and poignant, and just, this paragraph:

But Yuuta died and it hasn't been the same. He hasn't felt like taking them anymore.

nearly actually made me cry, just because it was so simple, and I don't think it would've had that effect on me if it had been anything more than it was. You're letting the reader do all the work, and the results of everything in this story are brilliant and frightening. I gasped at a few moments, and I still feel as if I want to cry, just because the whole world feels vivid and horrible, and I want to cry for Yuuta, stuck in such an awful place with no recollection of who he is or who he was, and I want to cry for Shuusuke, who believes Yuuta is dead and doesn't want to take photos anymore, and... ;___;

Thank you so much for writing this! ^________^

[airairo]

Really glad you're enjoying this! I'm having a great time writing it. ^__^ I think I'm getting more comfortable with this style, tho I don't imagine I'd use it at length outside of this fic. XD

*pets both of them* Man.. they seem to be in need of petting a lot lately, don't they? XD

Thank you for reading! More soon. ♥♥ ^_^

[airairo]

I'm glad you're enjoying it so far! Thank you for reading! More soon. ♥ ^__^

[samurai_jun]

Man, this is getting better and better!

[airairo]

Glad you're enjoying it! More soon. ♥