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theotheralissa

One Piece - Nix - Smoker/Ace

Aug 30, 2005 18:21

Title: Nix
Pairing/Characters: Smoker x Ace
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: Does not belong to me.
Notes: Written for 30_kisses theme #8.

( Nix )

one piece, smoker/ace

Comments 20

beanchan August 31 2005, 01:05:14 UTC

Oh that was simply delicious

airairo August 31 2005, 23:44:53 UTC

Thank you! Glad you liked it. :D

dethorats August 31 2005, 01:19:04 UTC

Nice! I like Smoker's denial and his rambling thoughts.

airairo August 31 2005, 23:44:24 UTC

I'm glad you liked! Thank you. :D

paxnirvana August 31 2005, 01:36:06 UTC

guh... lovely... deny it all you want, Taisa. It's real. And so is Ace.

Beautiful! *snerks* Pea brain... *laughs*

airairo August 31 2005, 23:43:50 UTC

Hehe. Smoker is a grump, isn't he? XD *pets him*

I'm glad you liked! Thank you. ^__^

kichara August 31 2005, 02:42:57 UTC

Ace can be so damn obnoxious sometimes. All the time.

I like that line. :D

airairo August 31 2005, 23:43:15 UTC

Thank you! ^__^

pleasance August 31 2005, 03:59:58 UTC

Really enjoyable to read. I haven't seen the part of OP where Ace and Smoker show up, but I'm looking forward to it. Also, I apologize for my ignorance, but what does taisa mean exactly?

airairo August 31 2005, 23:42:28 UTC

*facepalm* I'm sorry! I really should have included a translation note. My apologies. Taisa = captain.

But I'm glad you liked! ^__^