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[theoriginal_ist]

Disclaimer: I don't own Gundam Wing.
Rating: G
Warnings: None.
Characters: Dorothy, Treize, Zechs
Note: This takes place before the series, at this point Dorothy's seven, Zechs is ten, and Treize is fourteen.  It's going to be a pretty big arc I think.  This is chapter one. 
Title: As The World Falls Down.
Chapter: One: Children's Games
Summary: In which

Comments

[cozzybob]

Oooh! Finally catching up at the gw_dark comm, and I just found this. This is excellent so far! I love the language, and the setting you've created. You can really feel the characters, and I love their connection to each other. Good stuff!

[theoriginal_ist]

Aw, I'm glad you like it! I'm trying to update it every Sunday, we'll see how long that lasts. Thanks for the wonderful comment. =)

[schizoid_sprite]

Nice work! I'm always intrigued by Dorothy's--and well, by Treize's--pasts. This one's realistically good...very believable that this little Dorothy will grow to the Dorothy we've seen in the series. Really, I've thought before if ever she went to Lake Victoria..uh, or any other military school. I'd like to see if she gets enrolled, hee! And 'Thea'..I think it suits here more than her other nicknames, given her ethnicity and all. I found the cousins' banter really cute!

Well done, I'd love to see more of this!

[theoriginal_ist]

Aw thanks for the comment! I've always loved their pasts so it was only a matter of time before I tried to tackle it. Lol. You will in fact see if she becomes enrolled. No worries there! As for Thea: I love it so much more than "Doro" or "Dory" or even the few cases of "Dorito" I've seen so I'm glad it's being relatively positively received! Thank you once again!