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LUNCH THEFT(JAM/Ensemble) PG

Apr 24, 2007 14:14

Lunch Theft
Kevin Greene
Ensemble
2500+
PG
When Michael's mom-made lunch disappears he turns the office upside down to find the person responsible. Meanwhile, Jim plans a day trip to New York with Pam.
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This is my second Office Script. This is a 'Tweener-sode" that takes place between "Christmas Party" and "Booze Cruise". This entry ( Read more... )

couple: jim/pam, rating: pg, character: ensemble, author: kgreene317

Comments 8

amaliak April 24 2007, 22:09:48 UTC

Hee!!
This is written extremely well, not just Jim and Pam.
And the talking heads are brilliant.
A trip to New York! how exciting!
Can't wait to see who really took Mike's lunch...it's probably in his desk somewhere.

Thanks.
cheers.
--Lex

kgreene317 April 25 2007, 15:43:56 UTC

"it's probably in his desk somewhere."
HEY, WHO'S WRITING THIS THING, ME OR YOU?!?

lol...yes, this is completely Michael's fault.... but how far will he go to keep it going? ; )

Thanks so much!

julyeah April 25 2007, 05:34:56 UTC

best one i have read in a while!

i was laughing really hard at your michael and dwight scenes.

the pam and jim scenes were really adorable too :)

thanks for posting it!

kgreene317 April 25 2007, 15:44:44 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad you are enoying it! Hopefully, I won't goof it up.... : )

speedbumpsal April 26 2007, 01:43:57 UTC

never thought i could be so proud of someone i don't even know.... ;)

kgreene317 April 26 2007, 14:01:06 UTC

Awwwww...you are TOO sweet.... Thanks!

diabla71588 April 29 2007, 18:15:22 UTC

Great start! The Jam scenes just radiate cuteness, just like in s2, and you have their voices down perfectly. Also, your Michael voice is awesome- a lot of writers write him as too much of a buffoon, but you have it just right, with all his idocy mixed in with his sarcasm directed towards Dwight and Toby. Can't wait to read more!

kgreene317 April 30 2007, 16:18:15 UTC

Thanks SO much! That is what I was trying to get at with Michael. A lot of people make him out to be, as you said, a complete bufoon and it just doesn't read right. I wanted to try to get across that, yes, he's a dope and ignorant and childish, but he's also the boss and prone to get aggravated with people. I'm really glad you wrote that, I wanted his characterization to read correctly. If I can make ONE true Ofiice fan happy then I think I've succeeded. You made me happy. : ) And thanks, I miss S2 Jam cuteness so I wanted to get that feeling again. I love those guys... Thanks again.