Service Call-Act Three(Ensemble) PG

[kgreene317]

Service Call-Act Three:
Kevin Greene:
Ensemble:
1500:
PG:
Act II and Epilogue of my first script. :
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Thanks to everyone who gave this a chance. It's a script but it is very Jam filled. Especially this act, which got really long. Enjoy!:

Comments

[speedbumpsal]

sooooooooo funny! i loved it so much! the characters are RIGHT ON! keep it up!

[armagideon]

This is hysterical!! This is probably the most realistic office fic I've ever read; I can honestly SEE these characters talking. Your Stanley is spot-on. As is your Michael. I'd love to see more of your work. Great job :-)

[kgreene317]

Wow, thank you, that is seriously high praise! I really appreciate it! I hope to start on another one soon. A season two full on JAM one... : )

Script-Stories

[sorano916]

Hiya,
First off, I really like this story. You got a lot of characters' voices down. The format's great, too.
Secondly, I write script-format stories often on MTT, so I know how hard it is to find an audience for them. It takes a special way in writing them in order for people to follow and be interested without going too in-depth. I believe that you did a terrific job.
Keep on writing them! Heh... I love reading script-format stories but they're really hard to come by since they are hard to write.
Here are mine:
http://mtt.just-once.net/fanfiction/viewstory.php?sid=1247
http://mtt.just-once.net/fanfiction/viewstory.php?sid=1303
http://mtt.just-once.net/fanfiction/viewstory.php?sid=1567
I would love to get your input on them. :)

Take care!
~Sora

[anonymous]

This is really great!!! I loved reading it and could definitely see all the characters in my head saying every line!! I am ZERO knowledge of Hollywood workings but is there a way/process/possibility of having your script submitted to the show?? Even something as backwards as a link on Kevin's MySPace page??

[kgreene317]

I don't know... I mean, should I do something like that? That's not pushing it too much? Thanks for the kind words!