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Second Chances: The Booze Cruise (Jim/Pam) Rated T (2/10)

Jan 28, 2007 23:31

Title: Second Chances: The Booze Cruise (Part 2/10)
Author: greenfish
Pairing/Character: Jim/Pam, Jim/Katy, Pam/Roy
Word Count: 1870
Rating: T (language)
Summary: What if you had to relive the worst day of your life, again & again?
Spoilers: Booze Cruise (S2)
Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their ( Read more... )

series: second chances, couple: roy/pam, challenge, couple: jim/katy, rating: pg-13, character: roy, character: katy, author: greenfish, couple: jim/pam, character: pam, character: jim, challenge: groundhog day

Comments 11

quietdecember January 29 2007, 05:41:16 UTC

So good-write more!!

greenfish February 5 2007, 20:17:57 UTC

Thank you - I appreciate the nice comment!

anonymous January 29 2007, 09:23:35 UTC

Hiya. I'm really enjoying this so far and kinda jealous I didn't think of it before hand. Keep going!

--Pemulis

greenfish February 5 2007, 20:19:10 UTC

Thanks a lot! I wish I could say I thought of it myself, but I can only thank nomadshan for that. I took on the ridiculous task of writing this episode. (*insert Jim "OMG" face here*)

klawick003 January 29 2007, 23:27:01 UTC

So good.

I'm loving Jim.

More soon.

Favorite line: "My milkshake brings all the boys to the yard, and damn right, it's better than yours, damn right, it's better than yours, I could teach you..."

What... the fuck? Jim groaned as he rolled over in his bed. He opened his eyes slowly, watching the popcorn ceiling above him come into focus.

::giggles::

greenfish February 5 2007, 20:23:03 UTC

I actually did some research on this to figure out what was a "Top 40" hit around January of 2006. Then I made a biased choice on what might possibly be one of the most annoying songs to have to hear over and over again. And "Milkshake" was born...

(Of course, we must thank Kelis for giving birth to that annoying, birth defect of a song. And the fact that once it's in your head, you're singing it hours later and then cursing yourself.)

Thanks for the nice comments!!

torchwood_3 February 2 2007, 23:13:51 UTC

Why haven't you updated yet? Haha, just kidding... but seriously you should keep going it's awesome!

greenfish February 5 2007, 20:23:54 UTC

I am getting closer to being done with the next chapter. I'm very, very slow, unfortunately. I'll get there soon! Thanks for the nice comments!

officepenguin February 5 2007, 09:40:41 UTC

good job! you write Jim's dialogue very nicely!

greenfish February 5 2007, 20:24:47 UTC

Thank you! I really enjoy writing dialogue, so I'm glad you found it to be in-character.