New Story

[theoddment]

For now it's not really titled anything but Crimson Beanie, and that's not even a really good title.

Title: Crimson Beanie
Aunthoress: theoddment, Nicole
Pairings: Frank Iero, OC (Ingrid Rivers)
Chapter Title: None
Warnings: None for this one, but some for the chapters to come.
POV: first person

Comments

[cassilis]

It's a good start. I think I'm going to like where this is going. My only suggestion is to break up the dialogue with the paragraph. Know what I mean? Like, instead of including the dialigue in a big block of a paragraph, give it it's only line. It would make reading it a little easier. Good job though. I definitely like your style.

[theoddment]

Hm, what do you mean breaking up the dialogue with a paragraph? Oh, never mind, re-read your post. Haha! Okay, thanks a whole lot, I'm glad I got your comment! *hugles* YIM me or something later @ s.implicity, kk?

xoxo.Cole