Dude, I actually wrote some semi-original fiction....

[thenakedcat]

This is an original fictional story composed for my Creative Writing class in school. I'm posting it to LJ because it was heavily inspired by some of my Bleach fics, most particularly "Karma". In fact, this piece shares the same title...because I'm really not particularly inventive with titles

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Holy sh!t....

I'll tell you more once I've read it a second time and thought about it for a while.

[thenakedcat]

Please do! I only had concrit done on the first six pages (out of eighteen in the final draft) so I'd love to hear reactions.

[7owti5]

1. Uh, you RULE.

2. Ahhh, so THIS is the finished product! It's a damn good piece. The air raid sequence was gripping and terrible and sad - and the way you tied the lives together so coherently was VERY cool.

3. I'm really glad you posted this up.

[thenakedcat]

Yayz! You helped me so much with the first draft that it means a lot to hear you liked the final version! Especially the air raid sequence, because I just wasn't sure my writing would be up to that.

[snowflake_chan]

This is just wonderful. You really should be proud.

Honestly, I'm deeply impressed. Your language is beautiful as always, the pacing is nice and sharp and the emotional depth is gripping. Excellent work, and makes a fine expansion on the themes of the Bleach fics as well. Wow. =)

[thenakedcat]

*Bows deeply.* I am very glad you like it, m'lady.