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Mar 14, 2010 20:59

the danger of dreams, ten (rose/ten), g
he can still feel the compression in his chest as he absorbed the impact of her smile, 442 words, angsty
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challenge 26, :marcasite

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erateini March 15 2010, 01:04:21 UTC
:(

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marcasite March 15 2010, 01:05:42 UTC
Right. Need to put an angst warning in. :(

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erateini March 15 2010, 01:22:08 UTC
It really is sad and you capture Ten's sadness so well.

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marcasite March 15 2010, 01:24:56 UTC
Thank you so much!

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thatlibrarylady March 15 2010, 02:38:21 UTC
You did such a beautiful job of capturing the most important parts of their relationship and I think the last line sums up the story best. Well done (even if you did make me tear up a little).

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marcasite March 15 2010, 17:46:22 UTC
I love that icon!

Thank you so much for reading and leaving such a lovely comment

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wintergreen126 March 15 2010, 02:49:10 UTC
Just one whisper of her voice.

i love how he misses her and everything that encompasses her; how he keeps going but never forgets.

bittersweet and beautiful.

thanks so much for sharing :o) have a great week!

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marcasite March 15 2010, 17:46:50 UTC
Thank you so much for reading, love! I appreciate your lovely comment.

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marcasite March 15 2010, 17:48:45 UTC
Thank you so much! I really appreciate that you read this tiny, little ficlet!

As for all the angst...I've already finished another angsty piece for the photo challenge and am really waiting on posting it since there's too much angst in me now, lol! Need moar fluff!

Thanks again!

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morrighangw March 15 2010, 04:25:14 UTC
Oh, poor Ten. =(

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marcasite March 15 2010, 17:49:15 UTC
:( Your icon says it all!

Thanks for reading !

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