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[nipplemuggins]

one more bite of the apple, ten/rose, pg-13
She doesn’t know how long it is before she realises she’s being watched., 2214

Comments

[morrighangw]

Oh, the angst!! Poor Ten, and poor Rose for not knowing what is yet to come. =(

[nipplemuggins]

Oh yes, I am something of an angst fiend ;) Thank you for reading!

[momentmusical]

OH, THE ANGST. The glorious, glorious angst. ♥

I really adore the story you've spun out of these icons, and how you really explored things from Rose's perspective - that fine line between feeling like she's betraying the present Doctor, and her finally achieving that level of intimacy and need with this Doctor from the future. It really adds a new dimension to the fic, in addition to the mystery of what the future Doctor must've experienced for him to seek Rose out like this. The amount of sensory images in this is also incredible; every scene between them is so very sensual and has a very forbidden sort of feeling.

Marvelous job ♥!

[nipplemuggins]

Oh, thank you! This really made me smile. I am so glad you liked it - I wanted to keep that air of mystery and "spoilers", but I wanted us to be in the dark too, particularly with regards to what the Doctor has experienced.

Thank you for a really lovely review <3

[erateini]

Heartbreaking but just so perfect!

[nipplemuggins]

I'm so glad you liked it!

[nipplemuggins]

Thank you! I'm glad it came across as I wanted it to!

[hazelwho]

Ow, ow, my heart. I feel so bad for Ten, but I also really hate him for doing this to her. Poor Rose.

Gorgeous story!!

[nipplemuggins]

Oh yes, that is exactly it. You want her to make him better, but you also know what he's doing is wrong. I'm so happy you enjoyed reading it - I hope your heart mends soon ;)