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Dec 02, 2009 20:23

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She points to his round watch on one occasion. “It doesn’t work,” is all he says, his breath warming her cheeks as they sit close together. “but I like it. Don’t you?”, 2302

a/n: I am ridiculously nervous for this. I was gonna post something else, but I just ended up writing this instead. I'm not entirely sure it ( Read more... )

challenge 18, :dashafeather

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alizarin_skies December 2 2009, 20:37:58 UTC

Squeeee! Such a lovely sweet story :3
The ambiguity of the setting actually adds nicely to the atmosphere of the story, and the watch and cottage!TARDIS is just adorable :D

dashafeather December 3 2009, 00:36:58 UTC

Thanks very much! I'm so pleased you liked it. =D <3

teruel_a_witch December 2 2009, 21:23:19 UTC

ASGASGSDGJLDHL, you see that puddle of goo on the floor? Well, that's me, I might have just melted, AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW, I LOVE IT SO MUCH IT'S LIKE A LITTLE FAIRY TAIL/JANE AUSTEN ROMANCE WITH TEN/ROSE <3333 and he has a blue little house that is BIGGER ON THE INSIDE and a MYSTERIOUS WATCH *glee* I love the mystery but I'd love to know his story if you ever want to tell it, anyway, the whole thing is so cute, and adorable and touching and romantic, and enticing, I really love it *wants to wrap herself in this fic like a blanket* you have no reason to be unsure about it, congrats on such a brilliant return into foray of fic *squishes you*

dashafeather December 3 2009, 00:39:11 UTC

HEE. You made me grin so much, ya know. I'm soo glad you liked this, hee. Thank you ever so much! ♥ ♥ *squishes you back*

kynaii December 2 2009, 23:12:02 UTC

I loved it...
One thing.... Praying should be preying, unless something out there has seen the light and got religion.

dashafeather December 3 2009, 00:39:38 UTC

Thank you,
Oops, well spotted, thanks. Fixed now.

morrighangw December 2 2009, 23:25:02 UTC

Oh, this is so lovely. I love the concept, and you did such a gorgeous job. =D

dashafeather December 3 2009, 00:40:10 UTC

Thanks very much. <3

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dashafeather December 3 2009, 01:19:23 UTC

Ahww, thanks so much for all the awesome feedback :DD You rock.

I love that callback to Human Nature what he wrote in his book about Rose. ;D Clever, you!
lol, thanks, I'm glad you caught that.

And the watch doesn't work, he said! FOBWATCHED DOCTOR?!?!!? :OOOOO AAAAAAHHH.

Mhaha, that was the slight intention ;-) Which I was kinda weary about putting in, so I'm glad you liked it. xD

Thanks so much for the awesome comments. xDD Means so much ♥