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Nov 02, 2009 21:46

Dreams Again, Ten/Rose, Ten II/Rose, G
That woman with her blond hair and her full lips. She is always there, and occasionally he might try to call to her, even if he knows she will never hear him., 494 words
A/N: Forgive me if this is awful and/or makes no sense. I haven’t written anything in an achingly long time.

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dashafeather November 2 2009, 22:08:41 UTC

Haha, no, I was actually more going for the Doctor dreaming about them, but... actually, your way sounds better. Wish I'd thought of it like that, \o/.

Anyway, thank you very much for the lovely comment. I'm glad you liked it. =D ♥

rowofstars November 2 2009, 22:32:34 UTC

This absolutely not awful. It's like a winding surreal dream where you're not sure from one minute to the next which Doctor it is. It's a little happy and a little bittersweet. So lovely.

dashafeather November 2 2009, 23:00:42 UTC

Thank you ever so much! ♥ So glad you like it. xD

morrighangw November 2 2009, 22:43:57 UTC

Oooh, what an interesting concept! There is a dreamy quality to this that really works. And I love the little scarred, one-eyed ginger cat. There sounds like there's a story behind that! =D

dashafeather November 2 2009, 23:02:57 UTC

Thanks so much. Haha, the cat is actually kinda based on my own one eyed moggy with a scar on his ear. Though mine is black, not ginger. There could definately be a story there, though. =D Anyway, I'm really glad you liked this. ♥

stillxmyxheart November 2 2009, 22:55:50 UTC

I actually sort of thought the same thing as humansrsuperior, aware that it was the Doctor but thinking of John Smith all the same.

I love this a lot, it's so sad and beautiful and tragic and guh, I just love it. Fantastic job, bb <3

dashafeather November 2 2009, 23:04:57 UTC

\O/ I'm actually begining to wish I'd thought of that concept when I was writing it. It'd probably make more sense. Anyway, thanks ever so much. xD So glad you liked it. ♥ (:

stillxmyxheart November 2 2009, 23:32:05 UTC

Aww, I think it makes plenty sense as it is now :D

momentmusical November 3 2009, 00:05:36 UTC

I loved how to started with the cat, and from Tony (taunting his sister and her new ‘mister’ - I loved this!) to the Doctor and Rose. There's a gorgeous, dream-like quality to it, like the events you're writing about are both old and new. At first I was a bit thrown, but the way you wound your story down back to the Doctor tied it all together beautifully. Wonderful job ♥.

dashafeather November 3 2009, 08:30:06 UTC

Oh, thanks ever so much. I'm so glad you liked it xD ♥