Rooftop Reflections

[dralf_burns]

Rooftop Reflections, Tentoo/Rose with some Ten/Rose, pg
"An’ I want both of you to be okay. To be happy. Do you think he is?”, 1,381

Comments

[fogsblue]

Awww, this is lovely. Sweet and hopeful :)

[dralf_burns]

Thank you! I'm happy to hear you liked it.

[kelkat9]

That was very nice! I loved the pacing and insecurity and tentative nature. Nice job!

[dralf_burns]

Thank you!

[cehlainz]

I love how this traces his thought process. First he's afraid she's been abducted, and starts making a plan. Then he's insecure. Then he's scared and hopeful. Then elated. It's a wonderful ride. Cheers!

[dralf_burns]

Thank you. I had a wonderful time running through his thoughts, sorta a chaotic whirlwind of emotion. I'm glad you liked it.