Fic: Rooftops

[amberfocus]

Rooftops, Ten2/Rose, PG, She’s happy and scared and a complete mess. 987 Words

Comments

[wildwinterwitch]

This was the image that attracted my attention too, but I'm taking it in a different direction if the idea I've had works.

I like how TenToo's intensity about making her the centre of his life is overwhelming on the side, but on the other it's sweet to see that he knows about her hiding place (of course he does) but still respects it and knows when to come and find her.

[amberfocus]

Thanks. I think he would be very intense in human form, channeling the former Time Lord energy into something like extreme need and devotion, so she'd have to have a place to go.

[jer832]

This is absolutely beautiful. I had a lot of adjectives but erased them. I'll just say in its own quiet unpretentious way it is an emotional tour de force

[amberfocus]

Thank you. I was going for pushing some powerful emotional buttons.

[kelkat9]

I love how you captured her tumultuous emotions and how she works through it. This was very real and felt true to who they are.

[amberfocus]

Thank you. Pregnancy changes everything in a relationship and cause such a complicated series of emotions even under the best of circumstances. I think it would be a scary thing for them to navigate through.

[charlottetrips]

I really felt like you portrayed Rose well here. She's the girl we remember but with a maturity we didn't exactly get to see onscreen. TenToo is perfectly matched for her right now. I liked how she explored how she interacted with the different Doctors and settled in with the current Doctor she has now. Beautiful image of her and her emotions.

[amberfocus]

Thank you. I think Rose probably had to grow up very fast once she was trapped in Pete's World and the maturity would have followed along with it. I'm glad you liked the imagery.

[susanb03]

Wow....Very nice

[amberfocus]

Thank you.