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vamp926 in then_theres_us

The Window

Mar 19, 2013 22:31

The Window, TenToo/Rose, pg

He knows, when she’s in one of her moods. She stands at the window for hours at a time, her arms wrapped around herself, her teeth worrying her bottom lip., 296
( There are days when it’s harder than usual. )

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Comments 6

superioritea March 20 2013, 02:55:53 UTC

oh I love this - it's quick and quiet and it speaks of an older (maybe) more mature Rose working through her issues on her own. I like the definitive way she tells him she loves him.

fogsblue March 20 2013, 04:02:07 UTC

This is lovely, the calm of it but I like the way it gets to the issues. Rose needing time but the end. Perfect.

valiantwolf March 20 2013, 04:53:58 UTC

This is perfect.

kelkat9 March 20 2013, 12:28:14 UTC

Oh that's beautiful! I loved how you created such a vivid image in so few words.

jess_squirrel March 21 2013, 04:31:55 UTC

Beautiful. :)