glass boxes

Feb 12, 2013 00:31

glass boxes, handy (ten duplicate)/rose, PG
Claustrophobia’s a bitch. 783

She hates it a little bit, the idea that she’s walking when she could be running. )

wr1t3rbl0ck3d, challenge 001

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mylittlepwny February 12 2013, 16:37:45 UTC
first: fucking gorgeous

second: I'm just realizing that it's not in the challenge post and I'll have to fix that next time, but when we do photo challenges the picture(s) that inspired you is to be posted along with the fic.

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wr1t3rbl0ck3d February 12 2013, 20:38:21 UTC
first: thanks so much! I haven't written for them in forever so I'm glad to know it turned out well.

second: I added the inspiration images in and I'll be sure to remember for future entries. I'm new so I didn't know.

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amberfocus February 13 2013, 00:11:57 UTC
You wrote this very well. You can feel the awkwardness between them and Rose's need for space. I love the analogy of glass houses and being stuck inside a box and then breaking free. I especially liked this: the quotations here are all messed up, from different people or not existing at all. It gives that extra touch of the alternate world. It's a small thing, but it adds a lot.

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wr1t3rbl0ck3d February 13 2013, 02:05:34 UTC
Blahh thank you! It's been a long time since I've even attempted Ten/Rose, but I'm going to admit that her and Handy are my favorite because angst and drama, right?

Anyway, I'm really really glad you like it. ;D Thanks for your comment!

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callywaggy February 13 2013, 04:41:04 UTC
Sob, so good.

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wr1t3rbl0ck3d February 13 2013, 16:59:17 UTC
Ahhhh thank you! :D

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superioritea February 14 2013, 04:20:11 UTC
wow, yes. This is lovely. You had me from But she never got over the dirigibles.

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wr1t3rbl0ck3d February 14 2013, 06:35:19 UTC
Thank you!! The hot air balloons really inspired me because those dirigibles are like the first visual clue you have of the difference between Pete's World and ours. Bluh thank you for your comment, I'm really happy people liked this!

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fogsblue February 14 2013, 23:08:21 UTC
Gorgeous, sad but almost hopeful.

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wr1t3rbl0ck3d February 14 2013, 23:43:59 UTC
Exactly what I was going for! :D Thanks!

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