Gone Away

May 01, 2012 12:52

Gone Away, Ten/Rose, (pg)
Half-spoken words and broken hearts; this was never how it was meant to be. Set after Doomsday. Inspired by Gone Away by Lucy Schwartz.
...the thought did not bring him any comfort. Rose was still lost to him, and he was still alone. 1500
...and all we see has gone away )

challenge 97, :arliddian

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charlottetrips May 5 2012, 22:15:06 UTC
As always, I love anything you write. This was no exception. I also loved the song! Listened to it as I was reading and it was perfect. I'm glad that you tackled both their perspectives too! :)

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arliddian May 6 2012, 05:50:27 UTC
Thank you so much! I'm so glad you liked it, and that you liked the song! It's beautiful, isn't it? The first time I heard it, I thought this is Doctor/Rose, entirely, so I'm glad I had an opportunity to use it in a fic. =)

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someplacetobe May 6 2012, 04:07:51 UTC
I liked seeing both sides of what they were experiencing; the song was also a great choice for this: it fit what was written very nicely.

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arliddian May 6 2012, 05:51:38 UTC
Thank you! It was fun to look at this one from both sides, and I'm glad the song fit with what I wrote - I often stress over that aspect of song-related fics, so it's a relief that this one came out alright. =)

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silverlunarstar May 6 2012, 21:12:28 UTC
*Bursts into tears*

Perfect song. Perfect writing.

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arliddian May 7 2012, 00:06:56 UTC
Thank you so much! I'm so glad you liked it. =)

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fogsblue May 7 2012, 15:49:29 UTC
Oh, that hurts. It's wonderful and touching and sad. But I loved the points of view, especially Rose's determination.

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arliddian May 7 2012, 20:42:00 UTC
Thank you very much - I'm glad you liked both points of view. =)

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tkross23 January 25 2013, 22:31:03 UTC
Very beautiful! My heart broke all over again for both of them.

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arliddian January 25 2013, 22:33:08 UTC
Thank you very much! Their story is so bittersweet; I'm glad this little fic evoked that for you. =)

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