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Aug 18, 2009 00:20

Bittersweet Symphony, Doctor/Rose, pg-13
There is music playing… 606 words

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challenge 09, :spoons1899

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stillxmyxheart August 18 2009, 05:29:31 UTC
There is no music playing the first time he kisses her, open-mouthed and achingly slow. Inside that moment, in TARDIS in the Vortex, the silence is so complete Rose is pretty sure she’s hearing the sound time makes when it stops.

I think that's my favorite section <3

This is absolutely gorgeous, doll, I love it! It made me smile and made my heart break, all in the space of about 3 seconds.

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spoons1899 August 18 2009, 07:01:06 UTC
Aw, thank you so much!

I'm thrilled to hear that was your favorite section, it took me quite a few tries to get that second sentence right.

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morrighangw August 18 2009, 06:20:47 UTC
Gorgeously beautiful and heartbreaking.

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spoons1899 August 18 2009, 07:01:24 UTC
Thank you. :)

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feebeeglee August 18 2009, 08:01:50 UTC
Augh, the inevitability of the ending. I swear I love/hate this ship. Every time I get that gut-punch feeling. I almost stopped reading so I didn't have to feel it again, but you compelled me.

Beautiful, beautiful.

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spoons1899 August 18 2009, 17:06:00 UTC
Thank you, I'm… glad I compelled you? :) But I apologize for the gut-punch. I promise the next one I'm writing is much happier.

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glorious_clio August 18 2009, 16:11:52 UTC
Oh, I loved this! It was so beautiful.

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spoons1899 August 18 2009, 17:07:22 UTC
Thank you!

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rowofstars August 18 2009, 17:43:00 UTC
the silence is so complete Rose is pretty sure she’s hearing the sound time makes when it stops.

*curls up in this phrase and dies happy*

Lovely, just lovely.

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