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amberfocus in then_theres_us

Fic: Ten Seconds

Apr 14, 2012 14:00

Ten Seconds, Nine/Rose, G, 244 words Is she more than teeth and tail and blood and bone and a snarl from a nightmare that haunts everything, will haunt everything forever?

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challenge 96, :amberfocus

Comments 7

shelwass April 15 2012, 00:38:02 UTC

Mmm...lovely. :)

amberfocus April 15 2012, 19:34:37 UTC

Thank you.

silverlunarstar April 15 2012, 17:40:50 UTC

This was brilliant!

amberfocus April 15 2012, 19:34:46 UTC

Thank you.

zazie11 April 16 2012, 00:21:02 UTC

Is she dying? Is she killing?

and

She feels power. Hers. His.

♥

You give good brevity, Amber. ;)

charlottetrips April 16 2012, 05:23:38 UTC

I loved the terseness of this. You said so little yet so much in a space of two heartbeats and it was wonderful to read.