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charlottetrips in then_theres_us

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Apr 08, 2012 16:13

Whispered Scent, Eleven/Rose, pg
Rose was like Persephone, bringing spring where she went., 1601

( It was the smell of green and flowers that had brought him here. )

challenge 96, :charlottetrips

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charlottetrips April 9 2012, 16:57:00 UTC

*hug* Sorry Who!

That line was where I really felt like I was pulling the story together so thanks for pointing it out!

country_who April 8 2012, 23:53:58 UTC

Oh, poor Eleven, he's had a hard time getting over Rose, hasn't he? I love fics that go into that, where the Doctor remembers her. It's nice to think that he remembers her (because he obviously does) and cares about her so much. The unfinished card was brilliantly symbolic for the two of the, so many things left unfinished.

charlottetrips April 9 2012, 16:56:27 UTC

I love it to. Except for the two mentions that Moffat has given us, we've pretty much been Doctor/Rose deprived, which I sort of understand but it kind of sucks.

I hadn't realized I was being so symbolic on the card but there you go! :)

fannishliss April 9 2012, 00:22:26 UTC

this was so beautiful and sad. thanks for the angsty look inside Eleven's head.

charlottetrips April 9 2012, 16:55:32 UTC

Thank you. Ten wasn't the only one who was good at angst-ing

mae_stark April 9 2012, 03:14:21 UTC

Oh, my goodness. I think I'm going to cry...
This was beautiful.

charlottetrips April 9 2012, 16:54:52 UTC

Thank you *hug*

fogsblue April 9 2012, 08:08:34 UTC

Oh... That was gorgeous. Heartbreaking, but so wonderful. A glimpse into Eleven's head. And the relationship they had.

Though, now I think I need some fluff...

charlottetrips April 9 2012, 16:54:31 UTC

Thank you. Maybe I'll try fluff in a bit too!