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[charlottetrips]

a swan song, 10/Rose, PG-13
the dying song of a universe, 474

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[someplacetobe]

This was gorgeous; it sucked you right into that moment, his thoughts, and held fast.

[charlottetrips]

Thank you! I liked how you described the effct

[arafel_sedai]

Whew...yes...scary does come to mind. Irrational, passionate, intense, and perhaps even psychotic. But yeah....I still loved them together.

[charlottetrips]

LOL, that's kind of my thought process too

[silverlunarstar]

Absolutely terrifying! I love this! I want to be just as disapproving as the TARDIS, but at the same time I'm all...oh, what the heck! Irrational? Maybe. Worth it to him? Absolutely. It breaks my heart that he'd do it, but it's so interesting to read fics of Time Lord Victorious!

[charlottetrips]

Yes, I hadn't realized that that was what we called crazy Ten until Who mentioned it in an earlier comment and I had to look it up. There were times in Season 3 and 4 when I was like, "just do it Doctor, break all rules of time and space and be happy for a little while"

[silverlunarstar]

Lol, the same thing happened to me when I wrote The Lonely God's Angel for develish1's birthday. XD I thought when I wrote him, he sounded a bit out of character until fogsblue reminded me of The Water's of Mars, then I was like...oh yeah, he is capable of it. Scary to think about.
Yes~, why can't he be happy? :(

[bitwhizzle]

Whuf! So intense! I SO want this to be real. The madness that is love make the Doctor push that button, and the love that is Rose is worth it all. AHHHH! I love it! You are so good at just "getting" those feelings! Well done! So beautiful. So beautiful it hurts. And terrifying. Because the Doctor COULD do it...and break all of the rules...but that's what love does to you...makes you do terrible beautiful heart-breaking things to heal your own heart-break! AH! This is by far one of my most favourite fics. It just evokes all of the pain and sadness that I imagine the Doctor lived with for hundreds of years.

[charlottetrips]

So sorry for this late reply!

Thank you so much for this great feedback. The Doctor does hold much power in the palm of his hand and you kind of realize in his darker moments that he could do so much bad with that but stops himself from doing so. I think Rose is someone who could get him to break those rules but she would be completely upset with the Doctor if he did so (after the initial happiness of being reunited).

[kilodalton]

This was gorgeous, bb!

[charlottetrips]

Thanks dear! :)