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if_you_see_alie in then_theres_us

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Jan 25, 2012 20:25

Glimpses, 10/Rose, 9/Rose, G.

"You're not real," he says again, his eyes closed.

"No, I'm not," she says, pressing a kiss to his forehead as bright light engulfs her. 1,267 words.
( On the fifth try she finds herself in front of a sweets shop, a shelf of sweets covered in pastel-colored wrappings gleaming from the windows. )

challenge 94, if-you-see-alie

Comments 18

mae_stark January 25 2012, 13:04:29 UTC

Aaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhh whoaaaaaa that was brilliant! I love this, especially the ending!

if_you_see_alie January 25 2012, 13:53:51 UTC

Thank you so much! :) I'm so glad you liked it!

annissag January 25 2012, 13:36:05 UTC

That was great!

if_you_see_alie January 25 2012, 13:54:11 UTC

Thank you! :)

larxene_12 January 25 2012, 15:32:27 UTC

Aw. This is sad, but still sweet. Great job!

if_you_see_alie January 26 2012, 10:00:17 UTC

Thank you so much! :)

bloose09 January 25 2012, 17:05:04 UTC

What a beautiful, yet poignant, story. I loved the depth of emotion in each meeting between the Doctor and Rose.

The ending was perfectly done.

Thank you for sharing!

if_you_see_alie January 26 2012, 10:01:37 UTC

Thank you! This is my first time writing, so I was really worried about how it turned out. I'm glad you liked it! :)

angel_b33 January 25 2012, 18:45:46 UTC

Wow! This is incredibly well written! Great idea. The scene in the train brought me to tears though!

if_you_see_alie January 26 2012, 10:08:59 UTC

Thank you! This is my first try at DW fic, so I'm really glad you liked it. :)