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Nov 28, 2011 12:58

Can You See Me Now? Ten/Rose, PG ( Read more... )

:sapphire_child, challenge 90

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_thirty2flavors November 28 2011, 05:17:24 UTC
And they always leave a mark in one way or another. It’s just a matter of whether you choose to lament the fact that they’re gone or celebrate the time you had with them.”

NGL, coming from Ten, this cracked me up. Practice what you preach, bro!

But this fic was very cute. I liked the Doctor reaching out to Rose, and I liked their discussion on the boat about what it means to lead the kind of life they both lead. I like the way you wrote the Doctor's POV as well, especially in the beginning when he's going stir-crazy with boredom.

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sapphire_child November 28 2011, 06:00:42 UTC
Well we all know the Doctor can be a tad hypocritical from time to time :P bless him.

Thank you. I haven't written fic (or anything really) in months so I really wanted to get something done for this challenge to kickstart my muse into gear :P I'm glad it turned out okay.

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kilodalton November 28 2011, 06:23:31 UTC
It's 1:30 in the morning, and I still have lectures to watch for school tomorrow, but I saw that you'd posted this and was so happy, I was like "OMG GOTTA READ NOW!!" =D =D

This was lovely! Touching and very sweet! Great job, and I'm so happy to see you're writing again! =D

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sapphire_child November 28 2011, 07:37:58 UTC
Yay! Glad to aid in some good old fashioned procrastination :D hahaha ;)

Thank you so much for reading. It's good to be back :3

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isawthephoto November 28 2011, 07:28:16 UTC
Oh my god. Melissa and I were just talking about this crossover. This is so lovely and soft and lol Ten, what are you talking about with the whole "celebrate the time you had" stuff?

Again, this is so pretty!

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sapphire_child November 28 2011, 07:39:21 UTC
I was just listening to the soundtrack to Tangled the other day going "SO MUCH DOCTOR/ROSE" and then I rewatched the movie and this kind of fell out of me ha :P

Doctor = pot + kettle + black. I think he was channelling Gandalf or Dumbledore or somebody in this for some reason. Who knows why :P

Thank you for reading!

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sapphire_child November 28 2011, 14:32:05 UTC
Thank you darling. I've missed writing and am very glad to get back into it before I start Honours next year :3

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3pirouette November 28 2011, 13:02:22 UTC
absolutely wonderful! For some reason this passage really got to me:

The TARDIS wasn’t helping either, having provided Rose with copies of every Disney tape, DVD and data file she had onboard. A week in and it didn’t seem like it was ever going to end. Rose had spent the majority of her time curled up on her mother’s couch in her pyjamas whilst the Doctor reeled about in circles and tried desperately to not turn himself inside out from sheer madness.

Something about the way he's so desperate to help her, and willing to go absolutely bonkers to do that really says a lot about who they are together. Really lovely fic!

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sapphire_child November 28 2011, 14:34:50 UTC
Thank you so much! I can so clearly see Ten flapping about Jackie's flat in a complete panic because he has no idea what to do to make Rose feel better - and he wants her better more than anything. Bless him.

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