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[spoons1899]

The Floors of Memory, Doctor/Rose, featuring Donna and a few women from Torchwood in Pete's World, PG
Just tell me one. Tell me… the best first date you ever had, 986 words

Comments

[stillxmyxheart]

Oh, so beautiful and heartbreaking. That wonderful first date... *sigh*

[spoons1899]

Thank you very much. If only we could all have such perfect… chips. :)

[k_puff]

Oh.

Oh.

This was so BEAUTIFUL. So well done! One of my Top 5 Favorite entries to this comm, ever. <3

[spoons1899]

Wow, thank you so much! That's such a compliment, I really appreciate it.

[hippiebanana132]

I don't even have words for how much I adore this =) The symmetry between the two sections and their words, glimpses of each of them without the other, the funny lines of Rose's co-workers, the simplicity of chips as the best first date ever hinting at the importance of the person - all brilliant. Add in the romance and the angst and you have a perfect fic. <3

[spoons1899]

Aw, I'm glad you liked it so much! You are fast becoming my favorite commenter- you always have such wonderfully nice and thoughtful things to say. :)

[morrighangw]

*wibbles* Just the right amount of angst in this one. Beautiful.

[spoons1899]

Thank you. I'm glad I stuck the right angst-balance, my natural tendency with the Doctor usually is to knock it off the scale. :)

[takethewords]

*sniff* Gah, I love this! :D

[spoons1899]

*hands tissue* Thank you!