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Doctor Who Fic: The Daisy Lady

Oct 09, 2011 16:52

Title: The Daisy Lady
Author: silverlunarstar
Characters/Pairings: Doctor/Rose, TARDIS
Rating: PG
Genre: Humor/Romance
Warnings/Spoilers: Post-Rose; small bit of TEotW.
Words: 1,197
Summary: One-shot. Slightly AU. Everyone seems to mistaken them for a couple! What if the Doctor and Rose had gone to a couple of other places before watching the Earth explode?
Disclaimer: I ( Read more... )

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bloose09 October 10 2011, 01:03:10 UTC

If only I could be blamed for this kind of beauty all the time. Your fic was so poignant and heartfelt. I loved it.

This was such a wonderful part:
She surprised herself by being disappointed there were no daises this time around so she made herself blink repeatedly as a white flower was suddenly presented before her. Taking it, she looked up at the Doctor, back to the flower, and into his blue eyes again. She realized this was a form of apology and she opened her mouth to ask him where he got it from, but closed it as she saw his hands stuffed into the pockets of his leather jacket, recalling the Daisy Lady. Instead of questioning him about it, she simply asked, "Where are we off to next?"

Thank you for my new head canon.

silverlunarstar October 10 2011, 01:36:46 UTC

*points to icon* All your fault! :P

I'm glad you enjoyed it! I was a bit nervous, 'cause this is the first time I've written dialogue for the Doctor and Rose, so I wasn't sure how it'd come out.

That was my favorite part too. :) Rose is stubborn, but also knows when to leave well enough alone (for now).

Thank you for the inspiration.

ms_sardonicus October 10 2011, 03:48:09 UTC

Oh this was lovely. Thank you for the daisies and the wonderful Nine/Rose. :)

silverlunarstar October 10 2011, 04:16:37 UTC

I'm glad you enjoyed it! :)

fannishliss October 13 2011, 11:10:08 UTC

This is especially fun because I just finished reading the Nine novel Winner Takes All -- and Rose gets trapped with someone named Daisy!

I like Nine's frivolity and underlying grief. Very true to character!

silverlunarstar October 13 2011, 18:48:40 UTC

I HAVEN'T READ ANY OF THE NOVELS~! However, thanks to turtle_goose, I know have something to read (besides fanfics) during car rides. :D Haha, I have no idea where the daisy idea came from (somewhere in the recesses of my weird mind).

I'm glad I was able to stay in character! It was my first time writing 9 (well, and Rose), so I was a bit nervous. Thanks! :)

emraldeyedauter October 20 2011, 11:27:41 UTC

I think Nine's simple gesture offering her the daisy at the end of your piece made this fic for me. It's something that he'd do without question and not make a big deal of it. Rose of course is smart enough to understand. Lol oh they were such a couple weren't they? Even if they didn't want to admit it. Lovely little fic. Thanks for sharing.

silverlunarstar October 21 2011, 00:49:30 UTC

I think Nine's simple gesture offering her the daisy at the end of your piece made this fic for me.

This scene made it for me too. :) It was just supposed to be a silly little fic, but it just wormed its way in and I loved it. Glad they seemed in-character!

Thank you for your comment, so glad you enjoyed it!