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[redknightalex]

Drowning All Over Again, TenII/Rose, R-ish, ~2,390 words

Author's Notes: Huge thanks to redcirce for providing the uber-quick beta. I owe you.

She wanted to date, she had told me, like we used to, except not with different planets or solar systems but with simple things like going out to dinner, going to the movies, or, as we were currently doing, going

Comments

[10docandr]

IT'S PERFECT! That was great. I love them at the fair with the running and lights and excitement. It's so perfectly them.

[redknightalex]

Thank you. It also helps that it's fair season and I can still remember the one from last year. :)

[bitterwaffle]

That was lovely! Great details about the Doctor's sweaty palms (getting used to that human body) and confusion about the significance of a third date. And caramel apples.

[redknightalex]

Thanks!

I hate sweaty palms, personally, so silly Cloen not getting it and, thus, hating it seemed perfect. As for the third date joke...oh, that just had to be done. :)

Strange enough, I've never had a caramel apple before. They always look bizarre.

[redknightalex]

Well, it's apple and caramel. It just doesn't sound that appetizing really...

Oh, much more than lucky indeed. I hate that all my fics beg for me to write sequels because this one feels like it needs one. That being said, thank you for the, well, order, and the compliment. :)

[bitterwaffle]

Caramel apples are good for about 3 bites, and then the stickiness gets to me and I can't finish. Which is likely why I laughed my ass off when I realized that Rose had dropped the apple onto someone below her. :-)

[heintz57]

wonderfully and so perfect for the "third date"

I love the apple bit it gave me quite a chuckle I could just see the whole scene in my mind.

[redknightalex]

Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it. And the apple scene is so completely them. "Oops, we created trouble, again. ...RUN!" I think I laughed a bit too. :)

[davincis_girl]

Well done.

[redknightalex]

Thank you. :)