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Aug 28, 2011 19:20

Weightless, Ten/Rose, Light Adult

Just a month before, they stood together below the yawning maw of a black hole, the loss of his ship a sharp tear in his chest, the comfort of her body pressed against it. 1080 words

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karenor August 29 2011, 04:51:22 UTC
Oh, but this is beautiful. It made me maybe a little weepy, but it was still hot, and the visuals, stunning, even without the help of the picture.

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2nd2ndalto August 30 2011, 00:44:12 UTC
Thanks for the lovely comment! Glad you liked it. :)

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odakota_rose August 29 2011, 06:50:03 UTC
This is just lovely. I don't even think that's the right word for it because it's momentous and amazing but it's also a little subtle and a little silly (because honestly, these two can be such adorable goofs sometimes) and overall, it's just very them- if that makes any sense at all.
Oh! I know the word after all.
Brilliant. ♥

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2nd2ndalto August 30 2011, 00:45:07 UTC
Thanks very much! I like to think of them as adorable goofs. :)

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miranda_wave August 30 2011, 02:52:46 UTC
I'm with odakota_rose: very in-character, which most people don't manage very well when things between Rose and the Doctor finally heat up.

Fabulous use of the picture too.

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2nd2ndalto September 4 2011, 15:18:08 UTC
Thank you.

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julesndairyland September 3 2011, 17:50:24 UTC
Great coda to Satan Pit.

I love how you capture the Doctor & Rose's quiet teasing.

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2nd2ndalto September 4 2011, 15:19:12 UTC
Thanks very much. I like to try & keep a little lightness between them.

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emraldeyedauter September 11 2011, 10:21:43 UTC
I'm delighted to come across this fic today because I've been missing Ten so much lately. This little story soothes that ache a bit.

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2nd2ndalto September 11 2011, 13:31:28 UTC
Thank you! Glad I could help a little.

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