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Aug 17, 2011 16:59

You Belong to Me, 2/?, AU/Crossover, vamp!Rose/Ten, R

With the tips of his fingers, the boy lightly touches the wall that separates his flat from hers. He thinks of the girl, just on the other side - a raggedy doll with blonde hair and hazel eyes, who doesn’t go to school (but knows her Shakespeare), and who has forgotten how to feel cold. 2,395 w.

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challenge 80, :zazie11

Comments 13

phoenikxs August 17 2011, 21:53:21 UTC

Yay, you posted the next chapter!
In short: I loved it. So very in character. I don't know how you do it, but it really feels and sounds like both, Rose and the Doctor as well as Oskar and Eli.
And the anagrams are just plain amazing! So many cool and funny variations of NUTTY CURIOUSA.
I'm really looking forward to reading more!

zazie11 August 18 2011, 01:12:43 UTC

Yay - I'm glad you liked it! :D:D ( ... )

phoenikxs August 18 2011, 07:21:41 UTC

OMG, I totally did not see the parallel between Eli using anagrams and Bad Wolf "I take the words and scatter them..."!!!!
So very, very clever and cool!

zazie11 August 19 2011, 01:13:38 UTC

Thanks!! :D :D

All of that for Plate Tectonics? psyfi_geekgirl August 19 2011, 05:55:51 UTC

OMGANAGRAMSYOUAREBRILLIANT

I am following your frozen breath breadcrumbs...

Re: All of that for Plate Tectonics? zazie11 August 22 2011, 03:41:26 UTC

YOU SPRY EVIL TOO!

Can you guess? Can ya, can ya?

xD

Re: YOU SPRY EVIL TOO! psyfi_geekgirl August 26 2011, 06:50:15 UTC

Um...

*bites lip in concentration*

Ahh... Oh!

Is it: Overy Pious Toy??
Voyer pistol yo?
Very piously, too?
Suety ivory polo?
Yo! Stop your evil!?

I know!
It's: Yoou, evil Sporty!

...No?...

ILU too, bb!!!!

:D :D :D :D

cold_queen_5 August 24 2011, 16:44:49 UTC

Very good story! I can't wait to read more!

zazie11 August 29 2011, 13:40:33 UTC

Thank you so much - I'm glad to know you like the story! :D

More this week!

- Z

ninedaysaqueen August 28 2011, 21:58:31 UTC

I adore DW AUs, and this one is simply lovely! Keep up the great work. I'm excited to read more. And your version of the Doctor? Adorable! I find myself wanting to give him a big hug. Poor thing...

zazie11 August 29 2011, 13:43:24 UTC

Thank you - what a wonderful comment.

I know - the poor little guy. :(

Next chapter up in a couple of days ... :D

emraldeyedauter August 30 2011, 08:45:36 UTC

Another wonderful intriguing chapter zazie. Looking forward to more.

zazie11 August 30 2011, 15:42:53 UTC

Thank you, bb!

I'm glad you're enjoying it so far. Hopefully, I will have the next chapter read to post by the end of tomorrow. :)