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Aug 08, 2009 04:47

Drink Me Like a Liquor, Nine/Rose, adult.
The Doctor and Rose wrestle. It's (hopefully) sexier than it sounds.
He can feel the beads of sweat on his forehead, cool and scattered like rain, and sees the same shiny drops dotting her brow, her neck.

He drags his tongue across his lips. Suddenly, he's very thirsty., 990 words.
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:takethewords, challenge 07

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marcasite August 8 2009, 11:37:58 UTC
She grins the grin that started everything, that made him turn around and ask her again, that keeps pushing and pulling him around like a rag doll.

Your imagery is love! This is so subtle, yet sexy. Love it

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takethewords August 8 2009, 18:02:22 UTC
Thank you! :)

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takethewords August 8 2009, 18:02:41 UTC
Thanks! :)

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mylittlepwny August 9 2009, 21:18:20 UTC
I'VE TAKEN SO LONG TO REPLY TO THIS I FEEL LIKE NOTHING I SAY WILL BE GOOD ENOUGH, BUT WHATEVER, BECAUSE THAT WOULD BE THE CASE NO MATTER WHEN I COMMENTED.
BECAUSE NOTHING I COULD SAY COULD ENCOMPASS HOW FUCKING AWESOME THIS IS.
AND DON'T ARGUE, KAT. I KNOW WHAT'S WHAT.

1. I HAVE NEVER LOVED WRESTLING AS MUCH AS I LOVE WRESTLING RIGHT NOW.

2. She grins the grin that started everything, that made him turn around and ask her again, that keeps pushing and pulling him around like a rag doll.

THIS! THISSSSSSS! I DON'T KNOW WHAT YOU'RE TALKING ABOUT WHEN YOU SAY YOU JUST WRITE THE PORN, BECAUSE GOD, BB, LITTLE LINES LIKE THAT ARE SCATTERED THROUGHOUT ALL YOUR FICS LIKE THE BAD WOLF'S WORDS ACROSS THE UNIVERSES AND THEY IMPRESS ME TO NO END EVERY TIME I SEE THEM.
ALSO, OMG ROSE'S GRINNNNN.

3. He can feel the beads of sweat on his forehead, cool and scattered like rain, and sees the same shiny drops dotting her brow, her neck.

He drags his tongue across his lips. Suddenly, he's very thirsty.

SKAFJDIUOEJIK. FUCK.

4. He hums with ( ... )

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