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May 21, 2011 02:00

Moths, TenII/Rose, PG-13
"You were listening to the police scanners again," she whispers, somehow managing to cover up the hitching in her breath. Damn human endocrine syst--oh wait, that's his line. 961 words.

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mae_stark May 22 2011, 02:50:30 UTC

You think this is bad? And you wrote it at 2 in the morning?
Damn.
I think you're being humble, because this is brilliant.

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isawthephoto May 23 2011, 01:14:35 UTC
Well, to be fair, I think I started around 1 or so and ended at 2, but I was sleepy when I posted it, and the timey thing said 2, so I went with 2.

I really appreciate that <3

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isawthephoto May 23 2011, 01:15:48 UTC
Much to what I assume would be Rose's chagrin, he is definitely more of a Batman than Superman, personality wise.

Thanks!

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orange_crushed May 22 2011, 15:05:15 UTC
"Safe, like a moth hovering around a lantern."

"Safe, like two clever people who love each other."

Oh God this is So Good. So Very Good. He's out courting danger and still courting her and she's trying to keep his head on straight and er, not in tiny blown-up pieces. They just work so beautifully- they always did- and you capture it here. Lots of laughing out loud and lots of little moments where my heart tugged.

Gorgeous stuff.

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isawthephoto May 23 2011, 01:17:47 UTC
Oh thanks so much! I was going for a dramedy sort of vibe, so I'm glad you thought it was funny and also sweet/whatever.

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