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Feb 26, 2011 18:17

As Fair Art Thou, TenII/Rose, PG

Dedicated to professor_spork, on the occasion of her 21st birthday.

Rose wakes to the faint tickle of breath in her ear canal. The Doctor prods her bare shoulder with one finger, probably thinking he’s being gentle. “Rose,” he repeats in a more insistent whisper, “what are you doing today?”  1,502

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challenge 68, :beingfacetious

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tygerwulfe February 26 2011, 23:38:36 UTC
Oh, I love this! This is just so wonderful and sweet. And as a person who, much like the Doctor, has issues waiting for my love to wake up when I want to give her a present, I can understand his excitement perfectly.

Thank you for this lovely tidbit. :D

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beingfacetious February 27 2011, 13:59:11 UTC
Thank you so much! I'm happy it felt true to life for you :-)

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professor_spork February 27 2011, 00:09:51 UTC
\o/ yey birfday!

DROWSY ROSE. You know what I liiiiiike =]

Rose groans, squeezing her eyes shut. “M’sleeping, Doctor. That’s what I’m doing today.”
“What, all day?” he asks, sounding affronted and apparently finished with whispering.

CLOEN YOU ARE MY FAVORITE.

The Doctor slides closer and rearranges his body around hers, burrowing into her hair with his nose and stilling. Rose smiles, reaching back to pull his arm over her stomach. She is hovering somewhere between wake and sleep when the Doctor speaks again, voice muffled by her hair. “It’s just, the car’s already packed.”
She twists to face him, the end of her nose just brushing his. “And what car would that be?” she asks, catching her lower lip in her teeth.

I love how intimate and snuggly and tactile this is. I can hear the rustling sheets.

Rose waits a few minutes before following him, but it’s only for show.

<3333333

(“You can’t just scrap it! It’s beautiful!” he’d protested, and looked astonished when one of the men replied that it was “just junk.” Pete asked later why ( ... )

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beingfacetious February 27 2011, 14:02:11 UTC
DROWSY ROSE. You know what I liiiiiike =]


Heeeeeeeeeee I'm SO GLAD you liked it! :-D I promise I won't wait so long anymore. Never ever. Probably.

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wareander February 27 2011, 02:55:47 UTC
The Doctor prods her bare shoulder with one finger, probably thinking he’s being gentle. “Rose,” he repeats in a more insistent whisper, “what are you doing today?”

Omg, so freaking precious.

“Ah.” The Doctor slides closer and rearranges his body around hers, burrowing into her hair with his nose and stilling. Rose smiles, reaching back to pull his arm over her stomach.

SO SO ADORABLE. I did not know I could love him more.

...as he plucks various items of clothing from their pile on the floor.

This is exactly how I imagine them.

Rose waits a few minutes before following him, but it’s only for show.

Brilliant.

(“That diner in Wembley, with the bacon you like?” “Oooh, maybe-no, no, not today, no distractions.”)

Spot on.

This is genius, and I love it. You're amazing with action description, and with making me feel incredibly warm and fuzzy. And the way you write TenII is magic. Yay, you!!

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beingfacetious February 27 2011, 14:03:36 UTC
Ahhh you're so sweet, thank you so, so much! I'm so glad you liked it so much.

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sapphire_child February 27 2011, 05:02:07 UTC
GNGH. This is GORGEOUS.

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beingfacetious February 27 2011, 14:03:52 UTC
Hee. Thank you!

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quaintlullabies February 27 2011, 05:07:42 UTC
cute cute CUTE.
...I love to imagine them in bed in between the sleeping and the wild monkey secks that happens in meh head all the time. This is pretty much what I imagine:
Rose wakes to the faint tickle of breath in her ear canal. The Doctor prods her bare shoulder with one finger, probably thinking he’s being gentle. “Rose,” he repeats in a more insistent whisper, “what are you doing today?”

She frowns, lifting one hand to lazily swat his finger away. “Time is it?” she mumbles.

“Quarter to five.”

Rose groans, squeezing her eyes shut. “M’sleeping, Doctor. That’s what I’m doing today.”

“What, all day?” he asks, sounding affronted and apparently finished with whispering.

LOVE it!

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beingfacetious February 27 2011, 14:04:41 UTC
I love to imagine them in bed in between the sleeping and the wild monkey secks that happens in meh head all the time.
HA. No shame. We've all been there. (Often.)

Thanks very much - I'm happy you liked it!

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