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dashafeather in then_theres_us

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Jul 30, 2009 21:58

Just another normal day, Ten/Rose, pg
a/n: I really didn’t mean for it to come out like this… honest.
She saw him swallow thickly, and his eyes were sharp with regret so powerful she could taste it, bitter like tears, 613 words
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morrighangw July 30 2009, 22:05:50 UTC

dashafeather July 30 2009, 22:28:16 UTC

Um, sorry? ^^

feebeeglee July 30 2009, 22:10:09 UTC

whoa.

dashafeather July 30 2009, 23:02:00 UTC

haha. um, thanks? ♥

feebeeglee July 30 2009, 23:02:59 UTC

yeah it's a good "whoa."

dashafeather July 30 2009, 23:04:52 UTC

\o/ Thank you then. :-D ♥♥

stillxmyxheart July 30 2009, 22:11:08 UTC

Wow, this is heartbreaking and incredibly powerful. I actually contemplated doing a fic around this but decided I couldn't bear that much angst. But I'm glad somebody did, you wrote it so well. Fabulous job.

dashafeather July 30 2009, 22:30:57 UTC

Thank you ever so much. I was very worried at how angsty this was, but I'm pleased you liked. Thank you. ♥♥

stillxmyxheart July 30 2009, 22:41:45 UTC

I forgot to mention, I also really really love the last line. Like... it's beautiful and I wanna put it in my pocket and carry it around with me. Hah.

dashafeather July 30 2009, 23:03:13 UTC

Oh, thank you again, ever so. *g* ♥♥

hippiebanana132 July 31 2009, 00:20:54 UTC

Stunningstunningstunning. I probably shouldn't love something so tragic, but I do.

dashafeather July 31 2009, 10:05:15 UTC

Oh, thank you so much! ♥♥

rowofstars July 31 2009, 00:37:27 UTC

Holy... wow. That last line, just infinite wow.

dashafeather July 31 2009, 10:05:46 UTC

Thank you. :-D