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Dec 29, 2010 08:25

it seemed too young, Ten/Rose, PG
Gift for: 2nd2ndalto
Prompt: Ten/Rose, mistletoe, romantically focused
The Doctor discovers that it doesn't have to be Christmas to follow Christmas tradition.
Here it is again, seemingly innocuous., 1,507

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wickedgillie December 29 2010, 14:41:22 UTC
Lovely!

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rowofstars December 29 2010, 16:55:28 UTC
Thanks!

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happyfew December 29 2010, 16:49:03 UTC
OMG, THIS IS JUST GORGEOUS. I love the build up of UST so fucking hard, my god.

I could really quote every line, but I especially love the description of Jackie her lips too full and wet as she smashes them against his. She’d smile and laugh as he wiped a hand over his mouth. He’d probably have to gulp down an entire glass of eggnog just to rid himself of the pasty taste of her lipstick. THE AOG REFERENCE THO. ;_____; But hilarious otherwise. XD

Oh man, and the description of Rose toooo Toothpaste, he finally decides, wintermint or some such, and underneath it tea and chicken and pralines and cream ice cream. It should be revolting honestly, all that jumbled together, but it’s so wonderfully, sweetly, humanly Rose that his head spins with delight. SO SO LOVELY. And the characterisation of Ten through them is just delightful. Gosh. Oh, and the ending. ♥

STOP WITH YOUR TALENT AND ELOQUENCE AND STYLE AND BEAUTY AND PERFECTION PLEASE SIL, EXCEPT DON'T YOU DARE.

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rowofstars December 29 2010, 17:03:11 UTC
I love the build up of UST so fucking hard
I was hoping I built it enough before giving in. XD

And the characterisation of Ten through them is just delightful.
THANK YOU. Sometimes Ten is so damn hard to write and I feel like I can't get properly into his head. I'm so glad you liked it!

STOP WITH YOUR TALENT AND ELOQUENCE AND STYLE AND BEAUTY AND PERFECTION PLEASE SIL, EXCEPT DON'T YOU DARE.
YOU NO STOP WITH THE AWESOME AND LOVE AND RIDICULOUSLY ENDLESS SUPPORT. ♥

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2nd2ndalto December 29 2010, 23:08:21 UTC
OMG, OMG, it's Christmas Invasion fic! You have NO idea how happy this makes me!!

He can hide behind tradition and superstition, fun and Christmas spirit, pretending that every atom of this new body isn’t vibrating with love for her.

YES. THIS IS PERFECT. IT'S PERFECT. I AM REDUCED TO CAPSLOCK.

He sighs and lifts the paper crown from his head, folding it twice before he slips it into his pocket.

HE SAVES THE HAT. HE SAVES THE HAT. COULD THIS BE ANY MORE ADORABLE? I LOVE THIS FIC.

Okay, I could italic-quote the ENTIRE library scene back to you, but here are my very, very favourite parts:

The other stays at his side, tightened into a fist as if a part of him is still vainly trying to resist this.

She extends her hand to hook her pinky finger around his, pulling it towards her. He curls his hand around the tiny digit, unable to help himself when it comes to the spaces between her fingers.

The other stays at his side, tightened into a fist as if a part of him is still vainly trying to resist this.

He makes a sound, low and ( ... )

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rowofstars December 30 2010, 04:37:59 UTC
♥ YAY! OMG I'm so so so happy you like it! I've been anxiously awaiting your comment all day. :) I'm so glad I could write this for you, Merry (slightly belated) Christmas. ♥

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professor_spork December 30 2010, 03:52:22 UTC
Oh my god, I could melt from it. I cannot even. This is so wonderful lovely.

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rowofstars December 30 2010, 04:40:27 UTC
Hee! Thank you my darling. I'm so glad you like it.

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shadowed_gold December 30 2010, 18:43:03 UTC
It’s there just above his head, the innocent little viscum album, the perfect excuse to touch his lips to hers again. He can hide behind tradition and superstition, fun and Christmas spirit, pretending that every atom of this new body isn’t vibrating with love for her.

How adorable, him just standing there all casual like, "Mistletoe? What mistletoe. Awww. The whole story is just made of cuteness and sweetness. Love it.

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rowofstars December 31 2010, 22:17:54 UTC
Thank you!! And yeah, Doctor, you're not fooling anyone. ;)

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