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[missnyah]

at the center of stories, pg, Doctor/Rose

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[jessalrynn]

Excuse me just a second.

*SQUEEFLAIL*

Ahem. Such lovely, poetic, and inspiring work. It's simply breathtaking, from the beginning right to the end. It makes you want to fall there in your dreams, makes you want every minute of a day there, just to watch them and their wave-resistant world.

One teeny thing: second sentence, looks like a missing word?

Excuse me again.

*HUGSSTORY* It's SOOOO PRETTY!!!

*cough* As I was staying. The evocative word choice, especially with such things as this: "Saucy, she winks and he blushes like it's not quite allowed." I can see that look, exactly that look, on his face, and on hers. Perfect.

[missnyah]

Seeing as I hold you and your writing in high regard ... I am incredibly flattered.

I pictured this house near the ocean as a strange sort of still place that the universe would sort of pass through on its way elsewhere. Like, every archetypal, heart stirring character you ever read probably drops in from time to time.

So glad you enjoyed it.

[professor_spork]

This is beautiful. Wow.

[missnyah]

Thank you very much, my dear.

[angel_b33]

Oh wow! this is amazingly epically beautiful!
well done!

[missnyah]

Ah, possibly deserving of our Doctor and Rose then.

Thanks!

[rosaxx50]

There's something so deeply beautiful about this story, something understatedly awesome. The descriptions are simple but vivid, and frankly, the whole thing is so shiny and adorable that I want to give it a huge hug because it would make me happy.

[missnyah]

Hah! Hug away. Thanks very much, definitely an exercise in imagery here. Not much with the plottiness.

[someplacetobe]

This is poetic and beautiful. Its imagery shines from the words.

[missnyah]

Thank you. This one is definitely just a big word picture. Not much motion, haha. But that's the point, I guess.