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[jessalrynn]

One wish, I'd make it, just for you

Let me never have to say

Goodbye to you at Bad Wolf Bay

Comments

[tygerwulfe]

This was absolutely amazing. Every word. These lines especially brought tears to my eyes for some reason:

To stop and watch you while you sleep

Your mortal heart my soul to keep

[sapphire_child]

Sometimes rhyming poetry can come off as cheesy and seem like it's trying too hard to keep the rhyming happening...but this was just perfect. I love how you changed the rhyming pattern and - god - SO many bits I want to quote back to you because they're just stunning.

What a litany of love and loss and THEM.

I adore this.

[spellweaver731]

Wow that was incredible. I don't even have words. I loved it, every word.