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orange_crushed in then_theres_us

The living end.

Dec 01, 2010 22:26

The living end. Ten/Rose, G. The short, short time between "A storm's approaching," and "Same old life."

There's a moon,
upstairs.

( The living end. )

challenge 59, :orange_crushed

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thenakedcupcake December 2 2010, 03:31:06 UTC

Oh.

Just, oh. I want to take this with me and think about it for a while, let my skin and bones feel it.

You have such a way with the breathless thing in between places. You're completely magical.

orange_crushed December 3 2010, 02:46:28 UTC

Thank you so!

This poem would happily go with you, wherever you wanted. ♥

devohoneybee December 2 2010, 04:34:32 UTC

beautiful. oh yes, the sensual detail. breathless, with it's sense of running out of time, and yet being right in the moment.

orange_crushed December 3 2010, 02:47:07 UTC

Thank you! Breathless, yes, definitely. There was barely a moment between realizing what he was going to lose, and losing it. :(

professor_spork December 2 2010, 04:35:07 UTC

Gorgeous.

orange_crushed December 3 2010, 02:47:19 UTC

Thank you, darling. ♥

lovexwentxred December 2 2010, 04:52:42 UTC

This completely tugged on my heartstrings. So beautiful.

orange_crushed December 3 2010, 02:51:13 UTC

Thank you!

*tugs* :DDDDD

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orange_crushed December 3 2010, 02:50:58 UTC

Thank you! (Also, love forever at Sookie reading a magazine.... so calmly. That woman.)

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orange_crushed December 3 2010, 03:06:07 UTC

SHE DOES

SOOKIE IS QUEEN ERIC
nobody disputes this.