Remnants

Nov 30, 2010 18:00

Remnants, Ten/Rose, G, Her screams echoed through him.  (309 words)

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challenge 59, :amberfocus

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susanb03 December 1 2010, 02:18:51 UTC
Wow....

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yuvia December 1 2010, 03:04:00 UTC
I was thinking
"Like she understood joy on a level
So far above his
It shouldn’t even exist."
was BEST THING EVER!

But for
“Why does it hurt?”

Now he knew."

I don't have words.

The whole poem: Wonderful. Great. Amazing.

No-words.

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vicky_pirena December 1 2010, 03:28:20 UTC
How he’ll survive without her, if he can even
Find the words to say
But he leaves them unspoken and broken
How could he do that?
I read this and felt the same thing as when watching the pos-Rose episodes. Give him a big hug.
seriously... This is so beautiful. Well done (:

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dominique012 December 1 2010, 05:33:15 UTC
That is so painful and utterly beautiful.

I haven't watched the show in ages and now, having read this, my insides are all tingly. Really well done.

(I pressed the button too early :P)

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foxyhlc December 1 2010, 08:27:36 UTC
This is beautiful.

Tears that he put there
Despite his very best efforts not to

Feels so real in describing love in all it's complexity.

Going back up the page to read it a couple more times.

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