Comments | then_theres_us: Stars On Her Skin

tygerwulfe in then_theres_us

Stars On Her Skin

Nov 29, 2010 08:05

Stars On Her Skin, Nine/Rose, Ten/Rose, Ten2/Rose, PG
There's stars on her skin and..., 137
( Soft and sharp, hot and,
Frozen paradox of time... )

challenge 59, :tygerwulfe

Comments 8

thenakedcupcake November 29 2010, 18:17:27 UTC

But she cannot save all of him.

This line really struck me, a fantastic pause in the middle of beautiful flow. This is really lovely, especially the smooth progression between Doctors.

tygerwulfe November 30 2010, 00:41:32 UTC

I'm glad you liked it! I haven't written poetry in a really long time, but when I saw the prompts and that this picture had been reused, that line popped into my head and then... Poof. :P

kilodalton November 29 2010, 19:46:17 UTC

Aww this is pretty!

tygerwulfe November 30 2010, 00:40:33 UTC

Thank you! :)

amberfocus November 30 2010, 00:54:52 UTC

Everyone's killing me today with the angst. But yay, a happy (for two of them anyway) ending. Lovely poetry.

tygerwulfe November 30 2010, 00:56:20 UTC

Thank you! I always try to give happy endings, even to angst. Sometimes I fail. :P

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tygerwulfe December 2 2010, 06:17:32 UTC

Thank you so much! :) Just seemed to bring it full circle.

rowofstars December 2 2010, 14:56:35 UTC

Oh so lovely, but this line But she cannot save all of him just about killed me. (in the best way possible)