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Jul 25, 2009 04:52

The Difference You Make, PG, Ten/Rose, Jack.
Jack's POV, and sort of AU from about halfway through Journey's End. I'll explain how under the cut just in case anyone hasn't seen it yet.

He has never witnessed a love quite like this. 805 words.

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challenge 05, :hippiebanana132

Comments 7

morrighangw July 25 2009, 05:37:06 UTC

Oh my gosh. This is heartbreakingly gorgeous. ♥

hippiebanana132 July 25 2009, 05:43:39 UTC

Eee, thank you so much! I'm so glad you liked it =)

mylittlepwny July 25 2009, 06:22:15 UTC

His kisses ghost across her face, his thumbs catching her tears. Next to her ear, his trembling lips whisper words the TARDIS will not translate.

I love you, she returns, again and again. I love you, I love you

Oh, bb.

I'm crying and Rose is crying and while this may seem like a bad thing, it is actually the best, because this is beautiful and even though obvs Jack will never have the Doctor's hearts like Rose does, the way he feels is so poignantly displayed I can't even muster up a Back Off, Harkness, which normally I would be able to do in a snap because I am possessive of their love like that.

hippiebanana132 July 25 2009, 15:13:41 UTC

I can't even muster up a Back Off, Harkness - Haha, I am so glad you can't. I was pretty worried about this fic - I mean, there are a lot of people out there who don't like Doctor/Jack, even if it's one-sided, and even for those who accept it, it's hard to accept the idea of anyone else even getting near their relationship. So this means a lot, thank you =)

teruel_a_witch July 25 2009, 21:31:54 UTC

aww, this is beautiful)) and I love AU JE-fics (not that I don't love Ten2,I just love the possibility of Ten-not-being-without-Rose more;)) and Jack/Doctor is fine...as long as it's one-sided(It's kinda canon, after all ;D )

hippiebanana132 July 26 2009, 01:04:16 UTC

Thank you so much! =) I'm glad all the shipping going on here worked for you; I was worried about that! Doctor/Rose is so awesome that I'm usually totally against anyone sort of coming into their relationship and changing it, but you're right, the affection from Jack's side does seem to be canon. =)

Thanks again!

teruel_a_witch July 26 2009, 11:34:27 UTC

well, as long as Jack keeps his affections to himself (I'm sure he has the same fellings for Rose, too, btw) it doesn't count as coming into D/R relashionship;D

you are welcome, I love your stories=)