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Jul 23, 2009 12:50

Been Here Before, Alt!Ten/Rose, PG.
He can't help feeling it. She can't help feeling baffled.
She was staring at him. Really staring at him, like his fingers were stuck in the toaster (again) or he was covered in detergent (…again) or had broke something. (Again). 768 words.
Notes: Okay, I almost feel like I have to apologize for this. It's just ( Read more... )

challenge 05, :boxed

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marcasite July 23 2009, 17:22:06 UTC
Ah, this is adorable! I love the relaxed way you write them, she just understands what the doctor is feeling without his having to say anything.

LOL, gnomes! They should keep it!

Excellent!

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stillxmyxheart July 23 2009, 17:23:03 UTC
This... is adorable. Just... everything. Jealousy doesn't always have to be dark and twisted, it can be light and... well, I sort of imagine "envy" as being the lighter version of jealousy, a light green if "jealousy" is dark, sickly green, and this fic is very light green, and I loved it.

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mylittlepwny July 23 2009, 19:20:21 UTC
I HAVE THROWN MY BACK OUT FROM LAUGHING.
Except I haven't, not really, but IT'S DEFINITELY POSSIBLE, because I hear laughing uncontrollably for hours on end over brilliant, lolarious fics written by brilliant, lolarious people can have very severe side effects.

"Rose, it's just, I really don't think you understand how- how dangerous it is He pointed at the elf, his whole body arching behind his arm to emphasize how much he was pointing. It was a very athletic motion, he thought.

ATHLETIC MOTION OMG. I hope you like the sight of ~lols~, bb, because I will be throwing them your way an awful awful lot in this comment.

The elf waddled quickly over to the Doctor, wrapping itself around his leg before he could do anything about it. He looked at Rose, pained, as it wept quietly into his trouser leg. "Rose, I am not jealous," he said. But, really, he kind of was.LOLLLLLLLLLL ( ... )

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javabreeze July 23 2009, 23:42:11 UTC

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