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Jul 23, 2009 04:43

La Couleur de L'envie, Ten/Rose, r
Nineteenth century France, a painter finds a muse in one Rose Tyler. The Doctor angsts.
He takes a book to bed, reading the same sentence over and over while her laughter taunts him through the walls. She waltzes in after a few hours, red faced and grinning a grin that he's lost claim to sometime during the night ( Read more... )

challenge 05, :takethewords

Comments 15

dashafeather July 23 2009, 11:14:20 UTC

How gorgeous. This is just so full of wonderful things. I love how you handled the Doctor's jealousy, and then the end? Guh! Gorgeously written; I loved it. ♥

takethewords July 23 2009, 19:43:14 UTC

Aw thank you so much! :D

starry_eyed July 23 2009, 12:20:11 UTC

OOOOOH BB. I was so hoping you would write this week because no one, NO ONE, does jealousy and UST like you. I loved this, how jealous he was but how calm he was about it. It gave it such a sad edge.

When he climbed in the bath with her, I literally squealed.

The room feels impossibly small, even smaller when he closes his eyes and sees Rose, the lines and curves of her naked for someone else to see, to try and capture on a fragile slice of paper.

UGH. YOU ARE AMAZING. AND THAT IS ALL.

takethewords July 23 2009, 19:44:31 UTC

HEE THANK YOU LOVE. Yes, I didn't want him breaking things or punching in ole Alexandre's face, although that would have been hot. Ten is always like that anyway, quietly brooding about everything. lol

PFFFT WHATEVER YOU ARE AMAZING SQUARED. ♥

orange_crushed July 23 2009, 14:40:06 UTC

Mmm, hooray!

The sensory details are really rich and lovely; Rose's skin, the fabric and the soap and everything, it all blends together so well. Possessive sexy Doctor yay. And Rose, as always, level-headed and together and such a tease. Adore her, and you write confident Rose so very well.

takethewords July 23 2009, 19:45:39 UTC

Thank you so much! Confident Rose in fic is like, a endangered species. I love to help her multiply whenever I can. lol That got away from me but you know what I mean. ;)

marcasite July 23 2009, 19:57:46 UTC

I love your Rose. She's sexy, confident, secure and romantic. She knows exactly what she's doing and loving it.

You don't see a lot of "this" Rose in fics and it was a pleasure reading this.

This is very lovely! ♥

takethewords July 23 2009, 20:38:18 UTC

hee Thanks! I love this Rose too! :)

javabreeze July 23 2009, 23:29:57 UTC