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Five Ways To Lose Your Path On An Alternate Earth (And One Way To Find It)

Nov 07, 2010 15:33

Five Ways To Lose Your Path On An Alternate Earth (And One Way To Find It)

Ten II/Rose, Adult

"It's a shortcut," the Doctor insisted, tousling his hair in agitation. "Honestly, I souped up the car special so we wouldn't have to take the ordinary, mundane, anyone-could-do-it route."

Rose made a sound somewhere between irritation and amusement. ( Read more... )

challenge 55, :shadowed_gold

Comments 25

eskridge77 November 7 2010, 23:52:49 UTC

Loved every little last bit of it... :D

shadowed_gold November 8 2010, 05:17:13 UTC

Oh, yay! Thank you!

develish1 November 8 2010, 00:02:46 UTC

"Rose, please," he pleaded. "Clowns."

Thanks so much for sharing this, I really, REALLY, needed something to make me smile today, and for whatever reason this definitely worked, all of it, but especially the clowns.

shadowed_gold November 8 2010, 05:18:51 UTC

I'm very glad you got a smile out of this, especially if one was needed! Thanks for enjoying!

bratflorida November 8 2010, 00:38:35 UTC

This was great! And I laughed like a loon at this:

>>And then she had to go and squirm. "Doctor, can you shift the sonic to your coat?" she asked innocently. "Every time we hit a bump, it keeps poking me."
"The sonic is in my coat," he gritted out, hands clamping on her legs to hold her still. "Please, please stop moving."
"Oh." Rose smiled wickedly. "You sure?"
"Rose, please," he pleaded. "Clowns." <<

LOLZ...It amuses me to no end, combination of balloons, clowns and potholes. Great fic!

shadowed_gold November 8 2010, 05:19:42 UTC

It's a hard life, being the Doctor--you'd almost think the universe was laughing at him or something!

amberfocus November 8 2010, 01:07:24 UTC

How would either of them ever be lonely again, when he lived in her heart and she lived in his, and their hands were the bridge that connected them?

Loved that line particularly, so very true. Nice fic and excellent use of the prompts. You made me giggle and gasp all in the same story.

shadowed_gold November 8 2010, 05:24:26 UTC

Then it accomplished exactly what I was going for, thank you! :D They're just so perfect together.

kilodalton November 8 2010, 01:25:59 UTC

I like it!! =D 4 and 6 are my favorites =D

"their love, so much stronger than petty things like time and space and species."

is probably my favorite line =)

shadowed_gold November 8 2010, 05:22:03 UTC

Aw, thank you! That's probably my favorite too.