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Oct 31, 2010 22:51

Held my hand, PG-13, Ten2/Rose
IloveyouIloveyouIloveyou. The words were stumbling from his lips before he could stop them - but it was already too late. Rose had disappeared once again and the Doctor had to pause to slow his breathing and scrub his hands over his face before he could begin analysing the data he had just collected. The human Doctor ( Read more... )

:sapphire_child, challenge 54

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juliet316 November 1 2010, 01:40:50 UTC
Oooh that was creepy and the bugs were just the topping on the creepy cake. I'm glad Rose was alive at the end but my heart aches for both her and the Doctor.

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sapphire_child November 1 2010, 07:36:20 UTC
I was looking for creepy so glad to have delivered :) thanks mate.

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psyfi_geekgirl November 1 2010, 08:16:07 UTC
Ooooooo. Creepy but very cool. A nice way to end Halloween night!
Thanks for the ghost story!

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sapphire_child November 2 2010, 00:25:13 UTC
Excellent :D glad you enjoyed!

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jewelsavalon November 1 2010, 22:59:54 UTC
Bravo- creepy creepy bugs... thanks for that warning! Otherwise, loved the angst, it was beautiful.

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sapphire_child November 2 2010, 00:26:06 UTC
Lol, no worries. Thank you!

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salimali January 18 2011, 06:55:50 UTC
Oh this is so well written, emotional, scary and heartbreaking- Rose & the Doctor are seriously going to need some R&R (ie comfort and love) to get over this one!

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sapphire_child January 18 2011, 11:31:25 UTC
Big time man. I'm not a big bug fan so this really made my skin crawl to write :P

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