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Oct 20, 2010 21:08

Bad Things, Rose/Ten, R
He nods a bit and rubs the back of his neck, looking, if anything, embarrassed. She tilts her head to look at him, licking her lips ( Read more... )

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amberfocus October 21 2010, 01:27:59 UTC
I love that. Just the perfect amount of teasing and breathlessness. For a moment I thought it might actually be a vampire AU. Would have loved it either way.

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goldenwolfrose October 21 2010, 01:59:35 UTC
Yummmm! A really wonderful job. The Doctor's bashfulness and Rose's burning forcefulness, all come through in such a wonderful way. Thanks for letting us read this.

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tribalmink October 21 2010, 02:02:45 UTC
This is so awesome. Well done!

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someplacetobe October 21 2010, 13:37:45 UTC
I thought this might have been a vampire!AU and then there was that mention of fake teeth and the spell of that AU was broken. Wonderfully done,.

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professor_spork October 21 2010, 19:38:44 UTC
Like a few others have pointed out, I love the way you toed the line with the AU for a minute there-- it's rare that a delayed reveal like that can really be pulled off, and you did it effortlessly.

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